(first time i've ever tried writing a story. yes, this is based around hl2)
Prologue
Click.
The unit's thumb slid across the shaft of the baton; he used it as a torch, illuminating the room with a blue glow.
Oh god.
They found James.
The venomous voice of the unit with the baton slithered out of his vocoder.
"Amputate."
The room lit up briefly, leaving behind a corpse and blood against the wall.
I heard footsteps approach the closet; heavy footsteps.
I made sure Janet was in the passage; I ducked inside, shutting it and locking it.
We were the only ones who made it out.
Chapter 1: The Outlands
Halfway to the end. I could see the glint of light reflecting off the walls of the damp tunnel.. I pulled the crate suspended in a side vent out, quickly opening it; I handed the 9MM to Janet along with some clips. I loaded a grenade into the launcher on the MP7, sliding a clip in. We progressed through the tunnel.
We blinked, the sunlight beating down at us.
We've finally made it.
The outlands.
"Janet... I think we're going to make it. To the resistance base."
"Look.." she whispered, pointing. Just our luck. A gunship. We were out in the open- the passage was shut. We ran for the nearest cover, a small shed, but the gunship saw us. We sprinted - as soon as we made it to a distance where we could dive into a supply area, we dove into it. I jammed the button and the steel door slammed shut. I grabbed an AR2, loading a Dark Energy orb in, and, grabbing a few extra clips, I gave my SMG to Janet. They'd be coming.
We waited. Two days we sat in the dim light of the lantern. We decided that we had to go out. I opened the door, and saw...
Chapter 2: working on this later
go ahead tell me if it was good or absoloute dumb
Note: wrote in 2 minutes
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