Need an opinion

[LoLBert]

I've been trying out new colouring techniques and I could use some feedback on what I can do to get better, since I fail at colouring.

Don't base anything off the drawing; I only need opinions on the colours and such. And I don't want to hear that "Hah, Anime" stuff.



If this is too small to tell anything, I could draw a larger example using the same techniques.

And before anyone asks, she's a barber.


Bonus:

Drew myself

Bobe's a nickname

Edit2:
By request


Edit:
Coloured a larger one.

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[IkeTheGeneric]

What's with her arm?

[LoLBert]

Her right arm? Not sure. I'll look over it again.

[IkeTheGeneric]

You're kidding me.

[LoLBert]

Not at all. I tend to do crap I'm not even sure of.

[LoLBert]

I might've fixed the right arm. I think what I had thought was that her arm was extending backwards causing the upper arm to block light from the lower, but I might've failed at that.

Does it still look off or is there anything else?

[IkeTheGeneric]

It looks like a stub arm. You should try making it longer.

[Kamino]

I think she is an assassin

[LoLBert]

Not asking about anatomy, mate. I'm already aware that anatomy is off, but that's an issue that I have been working on for years and don't need any feedback on.

Anyways, I wasn't trying for anatomy and just drew this up quick so I could colour something, which is the reason why I asked above not to base any judgment on the drawing.

[IkeTheGeneric]

Ah. Coloring is fine.

Actually, it's really good.

[LoLBert]

I think she is an assassin

Something like that. Yandere barder who makes wigs from scalps.  

[LoLBert]

Coloured another one.

Also, is there any requests anyone has for me to draw and color to help me practice?

[Kamino]

You should be carful. cookie doom got banned for posting his drawing you might also.

[TeslaCoil]

You should be carful. cookie doom got banned for posting his drawing you might also.

Kamino you really are an idiot.

Good job once again LoLbert, I like the coloring but the supposed shine on the hair does not speak to me properly for some reason.

I'm also trying to learn to draw anime/manga/whatever but I'm having a difficult time grasping it.

I also see you are practicing at your hands more :o

[Mr.Interceptor]

That kid is skinny as forget. Draw some food in her hands. Then make another drawing of her eating the food.