why are you ignoring all tips you are given!?
you can't see what's going on because the entire thing's a loving mess!
instead of drawing many things with thick brushes and poorly drawn effects such as muzzleflashes you can do something better, like your avatar.
the only reason your avatar looks pretty decent is because it is resized, making it smaller, which allows you to see what's going on even though you've used thick brushes while drawing it.
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