Um I'm sorry But that is not going to get you into an Art College at least a high grade one. I'm only saying this for pure criticism and Sorry for bumming you out but You need to work on your shading Dark / Lighter areas , and the landscape looks way too cartoony.
In your art college anyway.
How provoking.
You're just mad because your kind lost the Battle of Britain to Christian Bale.
Lol, there were no dragons flying about during WWII silly.
He's referencing a crappy movie called Reign of Fire.