Movie Named The Survivors

[Kalphiter]

wELL I BET I HAVE MORE YOU TUBE SUBS THAN YOU lol

I bet they're in to see what stupid crap you make.

[Ad Bot]

[SuperFlaminninja]

I bet they're in to see what stupid crap you make.

Dude i wana come to your new years party for 2012 Please dont make me hate new years partys

[SuperFlaminninja]

OK first off the names in the red Have been taken and the the blue text is the story and Unknown means The part is open OK so lets first say the names and say if there taken OK
Jon Played by:                SuperFlaminninja
Jon Voiced By:                  TCGTwich
Jimmy played by:                              Unknown
Jimmy Voiced by:                              Unknown
Josh Played by:                          Google it
Josh voiced by:                                   Unknown
Jones Played by:                                  Unknown
Jones Voiced By:                                   Unknown
U.S President  played by:                     Unknown
U.S Precedent voiced by:                       Unknown
Zombies Played by:                             Any one who wants to be
Zombies voiced by:                                 Unknown
Aliens played by                                       Any one who wants to be
aliens voiced by                                         unknown
zombie SGT                                               i need like 4 to 7
Server Host:                                              Unknown
Website For movie
http://snpronextstepupthesurvivors.yolasite.com/
The aliens Drops a test gas bomb filled with a gas named amiter gas on area 51 to poison the U.S Army On area 51 but it just  mutates most of the aliens to zombies And they use the aliens techology to teleport to islands all over the world while the zombies are teleporting all over the world the aliens are escapeing.  all the aliens left are going to destroy the zombies but it teleports as soon as the aliens are in range of the teleporter.  zombies and aliens are sent to all over the world city's are gone country's and even continents  as four People  are fighting back To Find The Survivors

OK so send me a mewwage on Blockland forms Or you tube to sign up
my youtube is http://www.youtube.com/Superflaminninja Thanks bye And PLease if you arnt going to help just dont post a comment

Please re read story i updated it

[DrenDran]

Dude i wana come to your new years party for 2012 Please dont make me hate new years partys

With any luck he will ban you from his server, he gets literally hundreds of visters already, one idiot threating him not to come is just, well, idiotic.
Also:

the world city is are gone country is and     even continents  as four People  are fighting back To Find The    Survivors

The only "change" you made to your story is removing words that make the spacing look odd, and the story even harder to understand and more rediclious.

[SuperFlaminninja]

The Survviors sneek peek next week

[Jorici]

ok one person who dosent get rude about this  ok why they droped the bomb on there base they were useing it as a test range and theres nothing good about those 4 people its there luck and yes there is still survivors

Why would they use their own base as a test range?

:l

Jorici is not amused.

How long do you plan on making this movie? 20-30 minutes of survivors meeting each other is not practical.

I found his trailer :/

Excuse me? What is this? Don't make trailers in demo.

Hmm, his other "movie".

What is it with little kids and SWAT teams? Do you even know what SWAT stands for, flamingninja?

What the forget? You didn't make any of these add-ons!.

[The Corporation]

1. Get a better plot.
2. Improve your grammar, so we can take you seriously.
3. Organize and PLAN your movie, cause it looks seriously jumbled.
4. Get some help from the pros, they know how to do this.
5. Decrease the amount of characters, I mean, you can use bots and bot events with them.

That's all I have to say for now.
If you don't like it, then that's your problem.
If you want me to, I can write a plot for you.

[DrenDran]

Why would they use their own base as a test range?

:l

Jorici is not amused.

How long do you plan on making this movie? 20-30 minutes of survivors meeting each other is not practical.

I found his trailer :/

Excuse me? What is this? Don't make trailers in demo.

Hmm, his other "movie".

What is it with little kids and SWAT teams? Do you even know what SWAT stands for, flamingninja?

What the forget? You didn't make any of these add-ons!.

I clicked on his youtube account...
Now, keep this quote in mind:

wELL I BET I HAVE MORE YOU TUBE SUBS THAN YOU lol

now, that seems like he has a lot, right?
Well, at least some, right?

No, he has 12, and you can see where he begged for those few twelve.
And in the end youtube subs still mean nothing, but at least I get to prove him a hypocrite.

[Momentum]

Every last one of his videos are loving awful.

[SuperFlaminninja]

I would like for all of you to stop harrassing me about how stupid this is and his I need more experience. If this is so offencive that you need me too change the plot to fit your idiotic sense of my need for correct grammar and months of experience for my first movie fine.           The year is 2012. The world has advanced theyr technology to the point of colonizing mars. Little did we know that underneath the surface was a terrible secret that would change the fate of the galaxy.  An ancient breed of creatures some call aliens but others call them them the floggers because of there terrible methods of gaining information that they couldn't already read off of your mind. When they where discovered we tryied peaceful negotiations but our ambassadors were never seen again. The military set up a standard perimiter. This is where our story begins.  Jon a commando sent in to infiltrate the aliens teleported and discover where it went and then to return. A simple reconasaince mission in and out he told his squad. Before he even got 30 feet from it plasma discharges flew out into every thing that was not close. He was the only one of his squad that was close enough to survive unscathed. His best friend josh was struck in the leg and hit the ground screaming from the pain of his flesh gradually burning. Jon barely dragged him under neath an over hang on the surface of mars when an entire fleet of alien warships began to come out of the teleported. They were much larger and faster than human ships.  Alien drones as we call them now began to search the area for survivors. Drones are floating organic humanoid aliens that can run at leaast 70mph . Just then josh and. Jon fell on a cave that coincidently was directly under them. For hours they sat and listened to the screams of there brothers in arms but suddenley it stopped. The entire cave began vibrating az the teleported moved and more smaller teleporters left it. When it all stopped jon found a way out of the cave. As soon as he left a tear ran down his cheek from the horrible stench of death and blood. The sight was nearly as bad....... that is all to be revealed for now expect more this weekend. Please excuse typos because this was done on a mobile phone. Any advice will be accepted but critCIAm will be looked down on. Thank you.

[DrenDran]

Oh god word wall, where to start:

I would like for all of you to stop harrassing me about how stupid this is and his I need more experience.

You're the one who's practically stuff posting.

If this is so offencive that you need me too change the plot to fit your idiotic sense of my need for correct grammar and months of experience for my first movie fine.

Not taking people seriously for having no grammar skills once so ever is not idiotic. Having no grammar skills is.

 The year is 2012.

loving unoriginal.

The world has advanced theyr technology to the point of colonizing mars.

In two years we go from almost disbanding NASA to colonizing Mars, so unrealistic it'd ruin a lot of the plot fabric.

but others call them them the floggers because of there terrible methods of gaining information

Floggers, is that a word you kinda just thought of now, or does it actually have a meaning?

that they couldn't already read off of your mind.

Wait, so they can read minds? Anyway you put this, that ruins any chance of fighting them.

Jon a commando sent in to infiltrate the aliens teleported and discover where it went and then to return. A simple reconasaince mission in and out he told his squad.

Wait, so in two years, we're exploring plants, and teleporting? Jon isn't much of a name either, espically without a last name.

Please excuse typos because this was done on a mobile phone.

No, type right, don't you own a computer?

Any advice will be accepted but critCIAm will be looked down on. Thank you.

IF I DONT LIKE WHAT YOU HAEV TO SAY ILL IGNORE IT OGM

[Momentum]

I think anyone who makes movies that have nothing but violence are awful movie makers because they can't come up with a good plot so they just cover up the awful plot with violence.

[The Corporation]

I would like for all of you to stop harrassing me about how stupid this is and his I need more experience. If this is so offencive that you need me too change the plot to fit your idiotic sense of my need for correct grammar and months of experience for my first movie fine.           The year is 2012. The world has advanced theyr technology to the point of colonizing mars. Little did we know that underneath the surface was a terrible secret that would change the fate of the galaxy.  An ancient breed of creatures some call aliens but others call them them the floggers because of there terrible methods of gaining information that they couldn't already read off of your mind. When they where discovered we tryied peaceful negotiations but our ambassadors were never seen again. The military set up a standard perimiter. This is where our story begins.  Jon a commando sent in to infiltrate the aliens teleported and discover where it went and then to return. A simple reconasaince mission in and out he told his squad. Before he even got 30 feet from it plasma discharges flew out into every thing that was not close. He was the only one of his squad that was close enough to survive unscathed. His best friend josh was struck in the leg and hit the ground screaming from the pain of his flesh gradually burning. Jon barely dragged him under neath an over hang on the surface of mars when an entire fleet of alien warships began to come out of the teleported. They were much larger and faster than human ships.  Alien drones as we call them now began to search the area for survivors. Drones are floating organic humanoid aliens that can run at leaast 70mph . Just then josh and. Jon fell on a cave that coincidently was directly under them. For hours they sat and listened to the screams of there brothers in arms but suddenley it stopped. The entire cave began vibrating az the teleported moved and more smaller teleporters left it. When it all stopped jon found a way out of the cave. As soon as he left a tear ran down his cheek from the horrible stench of death and blood. The sight was nearly as bad....... that is all to be revealed for now expect more this weekend. Please excuse typos because this was done on a mobile phone. Any advice will be accepted but critCIAm will be looked down on. Thank you.

I'll take that plot.

[SuperFlaminninja]

Yea the year 2012 is unorigional but I don't care. So what if nasa is abandoning colonizing mars this is fiction and yes I am on a mobile phone because I don't have internet at my mom so I go to my dads on weekends and play then.  And who the heck cares if my spelling is bad on a touch screen mobile phone. What are you a teacher. When I am on a computer I will do my best to make you feel better by putting correct grammar. I know you will come by and scan this for typos so next time just consider that touch phones suck on typing.

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How the hell does this kid have more subscribers than me?