Author Topic: Need Feedback On My Adobe Illustrator Work (Read 847 times)

keonesan · February 02, 2011, 01:10:10 AM

Well this was a long time ago and it's not my greatest work but this is pretty much what I can produce on average within an hour timeframe. I was given the task of making a poster/design for the theme of "How Does The Principles And Elements Of Design Change Your World?"

We had to complete it within a very small timeframe and I decided to take the term literally by actually portraying how elements/principles of design can "change your world".

My avatar is also an example of my work which is pretty old and I'm too lazy to shade it. As for my more modern stuff, my school's network drive is under maintenance so I can't access the files.

Provide feedback please. And when I say feedback I mean CONSTRUCTIVE feedback.

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keonesan · February 02, 2011, 05:54:59 PM

Bwamp?

nickbond1 · February 02, 2011, 05:58:22 PM

EDIT: thought it was about Artificial intelligence, damn.

Night Fox · February 02, 2011, 06:00:22 PM

I came here expecting something about artificial intelligence.
AI is more commonly known as that then Adobe Illustrator.
Also in the title, "on" and "my" shouldn't be capitalized.

keonesan · February 02, 2011, 06:03:28 PM

Quote from: nickbond1 on February 02, 2011, 05:58:22 PM

-snip-

:/

Quote from: Night Fox on February 02, 2011, 06:00:22 PM

I came here expecting something about artificial intelligence.
AI is more commonly known as that then Adobe Illustrator.
Also in the title, "on" and "my" shouldn't be capitalized.

Changed the title. As for the "on" and "my" I believe that doesn't apply to subject headers.

Caution · February 02, 2011, 06:04:28 PM

I was reading the OP with arificial intelligence in mind and nothing was making sense lol.

keonesan · February 02, 2011, 06:05:11 PM

Quote from: Caution on February 02, 2011, 06:04:28 PM

I was reading the OP with arificial intelligence in mind and nothing was making sense lol.

Little late, I fixed subject already. God you guys are all one track minded. Hue.

Caution · February 02, 2011, 06:06:21 PM

Quote from: keonesan on February 02, 2011, 06:05:11 PM

Little late, I fixed subject already. God you guys are all one track minded. Hue.

I read it before you edited the post and remained silent.

tails · February 02, 2011, 06:06:41 PM

It's crooked.

Fargeaux · February 02, 2011, 06:18:06 PM

hmmm not enough change. there should be some more contrast, and also, the font is bad.

keonesan · February 02, 2011, 06:24:45 PM

Quote from: tails on February 02, 2011, 06:06:41 PM

It's crooked.

It's suppose to, to give a "3D" effect.

XaMMaX211 · February 02, 2011, 06:31:55 PM

Quote from: keonesan on February 02, 2011, 06:24:45 PM

It's suppose to, to give a "3D" effect.

Then you must have used two-point perspective. They were either way off or nonexistent.

Marcem · February 02, 2011, 07:33:47 PM

Anti-aliasing is a good thing. Also, 3d != crooked.

Smash Fan · February 02, 2011, 07:35:07 PM

cool
offopic: story bro

Kingdaro · February 02, 2011, 07:37:29 PM

The building on the right needs to be more straight, pointing in the direction of the bottom line of it in an isometric style.