'Why have you returned you coward?'
How is he a coward if he's returned. That's pretty brave, for all he knows he could get blown up.
'He has gotten much stronger magic.'
Swords are magical.
He ran away
Seems like he's the coward.
'The village of Aros'
Really? Seems a lot like the beginning village.
'He lies down, OH stuff I BANGED MY HEAD ON THE loving WALL.'
Why do you need the credits at the end AND the beginning?
Other than that, the camera angles weren't very good and the acting wasn't great. If you want to make a good movie, you need to try a bit harder and get a better plot. Also, if something goes wrong TAKE ANOTHER SHOT.