Author Topic: Blockland Move: The Arestoph Chronicles  (Read 1272 times)

This is a movie I made with my friends, Green Matt, HjxHJ, Raulcool, and many bots. Check it out, also a Note: Do not leave Troll comments because there are plenty of trolls in this series.
If you do not like this movie kindly leave the reason.
Thank you,
Auronblazer

Movie Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4pfh3jnCONs :cookieMonster: :cookie: :cookieMonster: :cookie:

'Why have you returned you coward?'
How is he a coward if he's returned. That's pretty brave, for all he knows he could get blown up.

'He has gotten much stronger magic.'
Swords are magical.

He ran away
Seems like he's the coward.

'The village of Aros'
Really? Seems a lot like the beginning village.

'He lies down, OH stuff I BANGED MY HEAD ON THE loving WALL.'

Why do you need the credits at the end AND the beginning?


Other than that, the camera angles weren't very good and the acting wasn't great. If you want to make a good movie, you need to try a bit harder and get a better plot. Also, if something goes wrong TAKE ANOTHER SHOT.

Thank you for your helpfull comment. It was a bit hard to get all my actors doing it right at once because they are all so far away so in every shot 1 of them has lag. BTW You said the Village of Aros seems like the one in the beginning I put "It has many villages like this one." I didn't say Arestoph was brave. And calling someone a Coward to tick them off is ok. Anyways once again thanks for your feedback.

WAS THE 1MINUTE INTRO REALLY NECESARY???

Quit the video after massive wmm text and stuff

I thought it was alright for a first. The overall idea could end up making for a good series. But for now, as freeze said, work on a better plot, better dialogue ect.

Bleh the movie is very basic, lots os editing needs to be done...

The intro does really drag on for a while.

Thank you for not trolling and actually giving helpful comments. Don't worry I decided to make it 3 parts long but you won't see any intro in part 2 and 3. Once again thanks for the feedback.