Mah new novel - Strata

[hodototman]

Its on the verge of being unreadable in its current state. You won't regret it if you take our advice. :/

I don't really know what your talking about, my friends say they can read it just fine...

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[DrenDran]

So do you want to be famous for it?
Or do you just need to express your teenage angst?

I don't really know what your talking about, my friends say they can read it just fine...

Yeah, the friends that probably said they could read it find like this:
"ya i can reed it its cool lol :D"

That, and each quote starts a new paragraph.

[Ziyek]

Smallest Chapters EVER.

[hodototman]

So do you want to be famous for it?
Or do you just need to express your teenage angst?Yeah, the friends that probably said they could read it find like this:
"ya i can reed it its cool lol :D"

That, and each quote starts a new paragraph.

They said it verbally, and their not handicaps, Dren.

Smallest Chapters EVER.

It's a Short novel.

[hodototman]

Take this.


हैलो

[hodototman]

And that.


तुम अब मेरे अच्छे पड़ोसी हैं. हम कर सकते हैं दोस्तों हो सकता है?

[hodototman]

So do you want to be famous for it?
Or do you just need to express your teenage angst?Yeah, the friends that probably said they could read it find like this:
"ya i can reed it its cool lol :D"

That, and each quote starts a new paragraph.

I'm hurt.

[Sheath]

All I am saying is that a well-rounded author edits their work. You are being lazy by refusing to learn correct grammar and sentence structure now, there is no excuse. You will kick yourself when you have to do it later... that is, if you finish the book. I question your commitment to it now.

[hodototman]

All I am saying is that a well-rounded author edits their work. You are being lazy by refusing to learn correct grammar and sentence structure now, there is no excuse. You will kick yourself when you do it later... that is, if you finish the book. I question your commitment to it now.

I'm doing it for the fun of it only. i dont want to be famous for it, Dren. Do you think that a 10 year old wants to go through that? (i know that sounded stupid and i don't really mean it)

[hodototman]

All I am saying is that a well-rounded author edits their work. You are being lazy by refusing to learn correct grammar and sentence structure now, there is no excuse. You will kick yourself when you have to do it later... that is, if you finish the book. I question your commitment to it now.

All you have to do is send me a PM with all the errors underlined, or post it. then i will.

[Sheath]

All you have to do is send me a PM with all the errors underlined, or post it. then i will.

I think you need to just work on improving your English. I'm not going to edit it for you.
Also, I believe the youngest author of a novel was 6 or 7. c:

[Alex Man!]

Sparta.

[hodototman]

Sparta.

Quit spamming my topics, noobs.

[Lugnut]

I'm gonna edit this to practice my skillz

[Frenchfrie]

Terrible write about Puppies. Everyone is good at writing about puppies. You should have a knack for it.