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OK,I'm going to write a paper about the effects of overeating and I need two more effects. I have "One effect of overeating is getting fat" but I need two more.
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« Last Edit: March 01, 2011, 10:56:34 PM by Legodude77 »

Ok,im going to right a paper about the effects of overeatting. and i need two more effects. I have "One effect of over eatting is getting fat" but i need two more.
Don't let me down blockland forums.
1:no.
2: Judging by your quote, you're not too good with english.

nausea, feelings of heaviness and headaches,self confidence lowered,etc
« Last Edit: March 01, 2011, 10:49:42 PM by StarDust »

less chance of getting love


Cause: Overeating
Effect: Organ failure in Adulthood.

Cause:Overeating (Again)
Effect: Tired and Energy-less.

Ok, Im going to write a paper about the effects of overeating. And I need two more effects. I have "One effect of over eating is getting fat" but I need two more.
Don't let me down /B/lockland forums.
Try to fix up your grammar first.


Try to fix up your grammar first.
Your fix is still horribly wrong.



Being a disgusting FATBODY.
Your fix is still horribly wrong.
qft

I fixed some of it :C
Weren't you banned for plagiarism or something?


Cause:Overeating (Again)
Effect: Tired and Energy-less.
I will try that one.
Also I edited the OP.

Weren't you banned for plagiarism or something?
lol, good times.