Life and Death in the Capital Wasteland: A Fallout 3 Fanficition Ch.7 on page 2!

[Sirrus]

Old thread is old, locked, and poorly organized so I figured I'd repost this here.

Life and Death in the Capital Wasteland is a Fallout 3 fanfiction I've been working on for the past few weeks. It's currently has 7 chapters and just over 15,500 words. I think it's a smashing story and would like to get some more C&C, either on fanfiction.net or on this thread. Either way, simply seeing a boost in hits is always a nice moral boost to keep working.

Tell me what you think.

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[Dj Smash]

Read the whole thing so far, it's pretty exciting

[Sirrus]

Read the whole thing so far, it's pretty exciting

Thanks bud. Any advice or things that were confusing/things that you thought were bad?

[Watcher In The Myst]

It seemed a little too fast paced...

[Sirrus]

It seemed a little too fast paced...

Too fast paced? Elaborate a bit, and if you don't mind just kind of explain what you think would be a better alternative.

[Kevin]

I really enjoy it :u

I just forget about because I dont check Fanfiction.net :<

[Sirrus]

I really enjoy it :u

I just forget about because I dont check Fanfiction.net :<

Perhaps you should bookmark it. I update every couple of days.

[Alpha Command]

This is pretty cool. I like it.

[Skateaton]

awesome.

[Sirrus]

awesome.

Thanks br0.

[Jaxx]

You should so do a tangent off this of a New Vegas version and make the two characters, by some whacky, coincidental/serious, world-changing event meet up and do some cool things together. :>

A nice read too, but doesn't seem to have quite the narrative detail that it could.

[Sirrus]

You should so do a tangent off this of a New Vegas version and make the two characters, by some whacky, coincidental/serious, world-changing event meet up and do some cool things together. :>

A nice read too, but doesn't seem to have quite the narrative detail that it could.

I haven't played FNV, so that would be difficult for me. Also, could you elaborate on that criticism? I'm having a hard time understanding what you mean.

[Oasis]

Read the first few paragraphs, but because of my homework I will have to read the rest later. Nice work Sirrus.

[Sirrus]

Read the first few paragraphs, but because of my homework I will have to read the rest later. Nice work Sirrus.

Thanks bud. As in most of my episodic creative ventures, it gets better as you go on.

[Sirrus]

I like how people post in this thread once and then never elaborate on vague criticism :c

It is nice though, so I guess keep doing that as opposed to doing nothing.

Also, I'm working on a new chapter. Hopefully it will be out by tomorrow night if not tonight.