Author Topic: The Maradonia Saga! "They're flying outta here like nothing!"  (Read 7044 times)

Ah so that's how, you use a comma!

"Gertrude, Lorris and Ceara also tried to eliminate the troops of the enemy with their wall of fire, waves of fire, walls of total darkness and with the glowing heat cushion of burning snowflakes!"

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Arabella stretched up her neck

Ari: Ew. Just ew. Bad mental imagery. Streeeetch. I guess she never heard the phrase “craned her neck” before.

Pan: Maybe she’s from those Thai tribes with the neck rings.

wow this is so unbelievably awful that i just might buy every book she's ever sold ever

wow this is so unbelievably awful that i just might buy every book she's ever sold ever

Bless your heart. You will give this girl meaning in her life again.

wow this is so unbelievably awful that i just might buy every book she's ever sold ever

And have a massive book bonfire?

And have a massive book bonfire?
ARE YOU CRAZY? I CAN'T READ FIRE! ofcourse not!!!

walls of total darkness and with the glowing heat cushion of burning snowflakes!"
The hell?



My brain cells are deteriorating at an extremely fast rate by just watching the videos.

I hate this mainly because of the description lacking themes. Ordinary words capitalized to make them seem mysterious. It gets on my nerves.

Check out her own website's movie trailer

http://www.maradonia.com/movie.html

So descriptive as well!

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If I hear just one sentence, that would be all I need to create a whole story.
This describes everything.

I hate this mainly because of the description lacking themes. Ordinary words capitalized to make them seem mysterious. It gets on my nerves.

Check out her own website's movie trailer

http://www.maradonia.com/movie.html

So descriptive as well!
This describes everything.
oh god the movie trailer was hilarious, it was just a single picture that keeps getting zoomed in on then cutting to text then repeating.

oh god the movie trailer was hilarious, it was just a single picture that keeps getting zoomed in on then cutting to text then repeating.

Can you believe she expected an amusement park and 6 movies?

Can you believe she expected an amusement park and 6 movies?
You're joking right?

Obviously a highly trained troll.