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Author Topic: Tortured and burned or whatever the name is :P  (Read 2733 times)

how can you make a story that not suited for younger people when you're only 9 :I
I'm nine in immortal years. which is like a century put together. I've met Adam boy!
Part 2:
 Ok, the last part was kinda off. I'll make it happier cause you guys can't take screaming.
While walking on the trail, he saw a 10 dollar bill. When he picked it up it was 100!
"Epic, but it's not gonna get me very far." He said. He went to the shop and bought some shoes and better clothes. and got a haircut. He was expecting to be called on by his steps, mostly because he did  all there work. He needed to hide his face. He also bought a jug of milk (Small) And some baloney. While the cashier was having problems with the cash register, he looked around and saw a picture of him on a poster. "Hurry up!" He said to the cashier
"Hold your horses! I've almost got it." He replied. When he got done he was out of that store as fast as you can say "Change?". He happened to bump into a police while speeding down the sidewalk. "Hmm going a little fast ain't we?" He said. "Uhh... Sorry...Sir." He said nervously. The police gave him a stern look, then continued along the road. Alex had a sigh of relief. Then he continued walking. He looked at his money and counted "59...60.".
He had 60 dollars left.
Part three will be here in a few days :P

Not a sentence.
Thanks for pointing that out, i'll fix it sometime when i'm not to lazy

Last time I checked this isn't an RP forum.


Mmm.
It just looks like you're telling us a background story of your name.
Good story though.

It just looks like you're telling us a background story of your name.
Good story though.
My name? My  boy name is reece, and my girl name is megan,
Berfie? Oh forget. Is this about yummygreece?
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-

With his two steps cry of laughter in a rocking chair.




What.


Things die fast in Creativity.


« Last Edit: August 03, 2011, 01:52:22 AM by Berfie »




Your writing kind of sucks. :/