In my opinion this is nasty. 1/10.
The colors are all off. They make no sense. The space inside is really badly used. Its too big. There are an unnecessary amount of seats, looks more like a massive warehouse storing furniture. The structure is basically a box with duplicated tables and chairs. There is no sense of "5 star" quality of an interior, and there is very little there that reflects a real restaurant at all.
Its very basic due to inexperience with building, which is understandable since we've all been there. Overly ambitious and it just hasn't worked. I have no idea why you need so many 3rd party bricks for something like this, its a key mistake that newbies take. A good example of how custom bricks don't make your build great.
To improve:
- Use better colors
- Don't dupe furniture
- Learn some restraint, big does not equal better, and duping an excess of furniture does not help
- Learn to utilize the default brick set, you don't need half of the bricks you downloaded
- Consider getting inspiration from real builds, this barely resembles a restaurant at all