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Skorpion
September 16, 2011, 07:10:41 PM
Makes little sense. Two heavy scenes of random violence from nowhere.
Just how I like them.
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The Titanium
September 16, 2011, 07:14:48 PM
Was this inspired by Minecraft? I got that impression by the first paragraph.
Also, what does a sadistic-looking helmet look like?
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