Anyone want to proof read essay? If you dont like to read, dont bother.

[SlayerZ99]

All this is really helping me
Now the hardest paragraph for me,
the third

and you dont really need to bother to point out spelling, thats just me typing fast.

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[SlayerZ99]

3rd paragraph done
for their similarities I wrote about how they both were trying to figure out how they feel, and who they really are.

[dorkdotdan]

Sounds like a nice story. A little odd, but that never hurt anyone.

[SlayerZ99]

I would like to do free writing, like making up our own stories and writing about them.

[dorkdotdan]

I would like to do free writing, like making up our own stories and writing about them.

Oh, That? That actually happened. Scared me a ton.

[Trifax]

Sounds like a nice story. A little odd, but that never hurt anyone.

Btw, This is a Paper I wrote for my class recently. I got an 83% on it.I love Open Office.

Since when is this thread about you showing off your writing? He's just asking for help editing/proofreading. I can't imagine why you would post that though, if you got an 83. Obviously it wasn't too special, or it would have gotten a higher grade. Aside from that, if you're just posting it to show off your apparently awesome writing skills, don't.

[dorkdotdan]

Since when is this thread about you showing off your writing? He's just asking for help editing/proofreading. I can't imagine why you would post that though, if you got an 83. Obviously it wasn't too special, or it would have gotten a higher grade. Aside from that, if you're just posting it to show off your apparently awesome writing skills, don't.

Fine Then, Baleeted.

[Skateaton]

Edit your teachers name into the post
If they check for plagiarism it'll go straight here

[Lil D]

Could you PM this essay of yours to me when you finish?

[Jerkface]

Edit your teachers name into the post
If they check for plagiarism it'll go straight here

I thought about this.  You're screwed almost since people quoted it.

Edit:  http://www.lmgtfy.com/?q=+%20In+Geeks+bearing+Gifts+Renee

uh oh.

[Trifax]

If they do search and approach you about it, just explain that it's you and you wanted some proofreading help from the community. Not a big deal, and it's not like they can get you in trouble for stuff you've posted on here.

[SlayerZ99]

My teacher doesnt care
anyways there was no  plagiarism
I read what you guys said and it gave me some stuff to write about and I wrote it
I didnt copy any of what you guys changed really