[128x128]World of Chaos - locked forever(once again)

[Grodus]

agree, the mech is ok I guess, but the character alone needs some uh.. improvement.

no

they both need heavy modification

[Ad Bot]

[Moppy]

no

they both need heavy modification

I am not very experienced at pixel art, or art in general.
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Do you have any suggestions on how to improve it?

[PurpleMetro]

I am not very experienced at pixel art, or art in general.
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Do you have any suggestions on how to improve it?

Remove the weird out-of-place colors in both the character in suit. Study some pictures on the internet, and try to add something like that to your sprite.

[Moppy]

Agh! I am having the hardest time trying to make my character have less colors and not look freaking boring.

[Cybertails1998]

any better?

also don't we already have a robot mechanic?

[Moppy]

any better?

also don't we already have a robot mechanic?

1) That looks great. Could I use that design?
2) The other guy is a cyborg. Do you think I ought to rethink my class?

[Cybertails1998]

1) That looks great. Could I use that design?

possibly

2) Do you think I ought to rethink my class?

Taken classes are unadvisable but acceptable

[Moppy]

But all the classes are taken! :/
Oh well. I guess we dont really need anothet mechanic.
I need to rework my character...

[Cybertails1998]

But all the classes are taken! :/

marksman

[Moppy]

marksman

OH DANG YOU'RE RIGHT! IT'S PERFECT! But I gotta go to sleep soon so I'll work on it tomorrow.

[Yosher]

marksman

*coughcharacterthatisabouttobeintroducedcough*

[Yosher]

???: Who are you and what are you doing here?
Don't you know this place is dangerous?

Masterockets: What are you?

???: I'm a mountain hedgehog. My name is Zero.

Velshyyr: What are those balloon things you just showed?

Zero: They're things I can shoot through the star gun I invented along with the Surprise Balloons. The blue one unleashes fireworks upon enemies, the yellow one unleashes stars and the red one is very thick and just hits enemies really hard.

Velshyyr: That's really interesting...

Zero: Looks like your friend was heavily electrified...
He's not going to react to anything at all until he gets a special treatment. Follow me, there's a hospital nearby.


A few moments later...



Music Virus: You forgot about me...la dee da...now you shall learn how deadly I can be...la la la!~
???: Don't take all the fun, brother...

[Yosher]

I feel lazy...

Also, Moppy, your character is declined for the following reasons:

-Eyerape, and aside from that pretty ugly
-Your skills are basically what every Mechanic has by default.

[Moppy]

*coughcharacterthatisabouttobeintroducedcough*

Dangit, man.

I feel lazy...

Also, Moppy, your character is declined for the following reasons:

-Eyerape, and aside from that pretty ugly
-Your skills are basically what every Mechanic has by default.

I've already realized the faults with my character and am currently in the process of formulating a new person.
Nobody's a spearman yet...

[Grodus]

Dangit, man.I've already realized the faults with my character and am currently in the process of formulating a new person.
Nobody's a spearman yet...

OI