OK TO CLEAR THINGS UP:
NO YELLOW SKIN
A little bit of noise is ok
I kinda want the visor to be up like in the picture, but if you can't make it like that then that's ok.
I kinda don't want it smiling, a face more like this :l
Don't make it look exactly like the minifig, I just used those parts because I don't have very many others.
Now to rate the past avatars:
Alteration: Don't like the little crest thingy on the front, could you make the face less happy looking?
BlockLeg: Don't like the red in it, not very detailed to me, don't really like the face.
fred da kiko: Don't like the green helmet or the face, don't like the red on it, the top of the pants is kinda weird.
nienhaus1: Face and visor is ok, hands seem too dark, needs a better belt or something to tell where the pants start, don't really like the look of the feet with those cuffs.