once again, get your head out of your ass. you've made no discernible attempt to add a plot to your story, when this is over it'll basically be a compilation of short stories with framing device.
yesyou're avoiding the truth that you can't right for stuff and just hide your terrible "talents" behind crutches, eg other people who feel pity for you so they defend you for being a child who's actually underage for an accountseriously kid, you're not kidding anyone.
I think that you guys are being a little hard on him IMO. He is good, but he's definetly not a pro. However, it's understandable because he is 11. Comedy, just work on elaborating scenes, ok?
I don't have terrible talents, haha.You make me laugh so much because you fail so much. Kids like me have more potential than you think.
comedy, accept the truthyou can't write decently until you receive better education
Dude, will you shut up? HE'S ELEVEN YEARS OLD.
Again, thank you for your wonderful comments.
alright, playtime's over.
No. Just no. Leave him alone.
He's just butthurt because I was annoying when I first joined the forums.
now where have where have we all seen THIS before hm...
3.) If you want to use an even better word, use the dictionary
*thesaurus
