cargo truck

[spiral]

Here's a cargo truck that I built.
I rushed building it and I was pretty tired.
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I haven't finished the build. I'd say about 80% done?
(No interior yet, no roof, no car-doors)
(forgot the rear-light >.<)

Criticism is allowed.
x/10.

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[Nobot]

eh 4/10

[Night Fox]

I don't like the top part of the cab, but I think the trailer looks really nice, and most of the cab too

[spiral]

eh 4/10

Thanks for your rate. :>

I don't like the top part of the cab, but I think the trailer looks really nice, and most of the cab too

Thanks. I actually didn't like the top either but I still built it; reasons unknown.

[Night Fox]

it is really thin though

[spiral]

it is really thin though

Really? Uh... would making it wider help? ...
... I think it's because I screenshot'd at an angle.

[DJ Dash3r]

7/10

Way to thin for my tastes.

[spiral]

7/10

Way to thin for my tastes.

Thanks, I will try my best to be better at building so it will satisfy your tastes.

[Barnabas]

It's a very nice attempt. I'd probably make that aerodynamic thingy on the top a bit more narrow, so the side won't be that slab-like.

[Crêpe]

it's better than ChappersTeddy's. his are average

very well done. just too thin!

[Corbiere]

You could probably cut 5 bricks or so off the cargo hold and remove most of that ramp on the roof. The thinness of it is probably not helped by the fact that is it very tall.

5/10 for now.

[Lamebro1]

Yeah, It is quite thin.

Other then that is is very good!

[darkninja8799]

Nice! now all you need is the slate moving ground and your ready to hit the road! VROOM! /710

[Conan]

Not bad. Good points are the rear view mirrors and the cab locking mechanism.

Stuff needs to be worked on includes cab shaping and wheel base/covers. A more visible door (denoted by brick outlines) is also a good idea.

[spiral]

I'm going to try another cargo truck and post it here.