Bloody Horizon, Chapter 1, Scene 1.

[RagnaTheBroedge]

that makes two idiots who think they can write here

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[Tingalz]

So they discover a new planet, then it goes out of its own solar system and collides with earth, but only scrapes the surface?
The forget? How is that even possible?

[Bach The Awesome]

Thats what i said the loving earth would not even be in space anymore

[Flamecannon]

So they discover a new planet, then it goes out of its own solar system and collides with earth, but only scrapes the surface?
The forget? How is that even possible?

on a whole new episode of futurama...

[Katadeus]

In response to the last part, thats why its fiction, you can make things happen that are impossible otherwise.

If this was fantasy, I would be more inclined to be lulled into the premise. As is, it's more of a realist horror type of thing, and I cringe to call it that.
How about my other points?

Thats what i said the loving earth would not even be in space anymore

How could it not be in space and how is that related to what he said?

[Night Fox]

what
if a planet touched earth at all I am pretty sure it would not just "scrape the surface" under any number of circumstances

also, wtf? how in the hell would nobody have noticed an entire loving planet getting close enough to earth to collide with it?
it would have been nowhere near a "normal day" anywhere on earth

and, it would have been way too far away to get anywhere near earth if the planet had been "newly discovered"

In response to the last part, thats why its fiction, you can make things happen that are impossible otherwise.

being fiction and making no sense at all are two entirely different things

[Katadeus]

His stories all begin badly, randomly, and formulaically. It wasn't the same day.
I believe his excuse for all of this is that it is fiction.

[ChickenMaster]

His stories all begin badly, randomly, and formulaically. It wasn't the same day.
I believe his excuse for all of this is that it is fiction.

>People point out and criticize the impossibilities of his story
>ITS FICTION SO THAT MAKES IT AUTOMATICALLY OK

[Jake White]

In response to the last part, thats why its fiction, you can make things happen that are impossible otherwise.

From what I can tell from your stuff story it's an attempt at semi-realistic science fiction. Like Night Fox said, "making no sense and being fiction are two entirely different things"

Science fiction especially typically follows a single hard-to-believe or unexplained element and having everything else in the story follow the rules set by that element. And please, don't write at all ever again.

[war monger]

He wouldet stop saying hes famous for makeing Good storys on my server back when we didnt hate eachother

As did you. For making your stuffty Blockland Nucular Apocalypse stories. And also i can tweak the placement for a different outcome, like possible hopeville could be a settlement on another planet?

[war monger]

From what I can tell from your stuff story it's an attempt at semi-realistic science fiction. Like Night Fox said, "making no sense and being fiction are two entirely different things"

Science fiction especially typically follows a single hard-to-believe or unexplained element and having everything else in the story follow the rules set by that element. And please, don't write at all ever again.

I will write when i want to write. I can improve. That comment was unneeded.

[Katadeus]

You cannot comprehend how bad both you and Bach are at writing.

[TeslaCoil]

"The birds were singing" made me cringe.

[Yosher]

He wouldet stop saying hes famous for makeing Good storys on my server back when we didnt hate eachother

well, you're not exactly known as the greatest writer yourself.

[Flamecannon]

"The birds were singing" made me cringe.

The contrysides were nice and the plants were singing and the birds and the sun was almost down from the top of the sky