This is pretty bad, and not nearly as creative as it could have been. The way it was edited makes it look weird and the angles in the first few scenes are poorly done.
It really needs a lot more work and time put into it. Also, the bandicam watermark is pretty annoying, like all watermarks.
EDIT: Music doesn't fit at all and there really isn't anything very comedic about any of it. It could use more effects and sounds.