Give me constructive criticism on these models

[Evar678]

So I've been modelling in blender lately. I'm a beginner and this is my 5th model ever in blender, and I just wanted to get some feedback on how it is / what i should change.

This is my second revision on an XM8




It's really basic and I haven't gone into detail yet, but it's relatively low poly.



Here's another gun I did, an iw-80-a2. This is my 4th model ever in blender, so, its still not much. I never finished detailing, I'll get to it eventually.

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[Gunnyz]

The First Gun is decent Could use more colors on optics and other things.

The 2nd gun Needs alot more work , Make the barrel Bigger and the stock looks like its just .. well a traingle that is connected with the reciever. Try seperating the 2

[Evar678]

the stock looks like its just .. well a traingle that is connected with the reciever.

Thats because it basically is!

The First Gun is decent Could use more colors on optics and other things.

I litterally finished this about 30 minutes ago.

I'll start detailing and such tomorrow, being as it's 3:53am.

[Crêpe]

I like the 1st one the best
2nd one needs work
But i'm not a big fan of weapons soo....

[Shell]

2nd one needs some work. It looks too simple, like you only put a scope and magazine on a tactical trapezoid

[Treti]

Wow, the XM8 looks really lovey.

[Evar678]

2nd one needs some work. It looks too simple, like you only put a scope and magazine on a tactical trapezoid

Yeah I"ll be working on a revision today or tomorrow.
I made this gun before I was decent at detailing and stuff.

Wow, the XM8 looks really lovey.

Wow, ty!

[Mega-Bear]

XM8 looks wonderful. IW-80-A2 looks kind of squished, but otherwise is also nice.

[Mold]

Please, go View -> Perspective and take the pics again.

[Watcher In The Myst]

Make sure the XM8's script includes melting action

[JakeBlade]

The first one needs more work on the texture placement.
The barrel on the second guns looks awkward.

[Evar678]

The first one needs more work on the texture placement.
The barrel on the second guns looks awkward.

Working on a revision on the second.


Will get to textures eventually on the xm8

[Evar678]

Please, go View -> Perspective and take the pics again.

Gotcha.

(note that i updated the XM8. adding some detail to the magazine and adding the endpiece. Also did a scope recolor. Pretty slight, though.)

[Ipquarx]

They look great, but the second one needs colour to distinguish the different parts of the gun.

[Evar678]

They look great, but the second one needs colour to distinguish the different parts of the gun.

Yeah I haven't put much time into that one. I'm considering redoing it 100%