Author Topic: Island - WIP - Suddenly an island!  (Read 1714 times)

Terrain successfully shows your ability to control the molding of terrain. I'd like to see more sharper angles from the stone to dirt; it'd make more sense to me because dirt sits on the rock, and any that exists on the side will likely fall off over time. I can see you did try to do it, though, whether or not it was intentional.

The sea arch is nicely done but a little thin. I'd thicken the center a little.

41/50 for its current state.

woo criticism

anyway look at that sunset cove



and a bird's eye


That looks beautiful, maybe add a few plants and little things here and there.

Maybe even a little boat dock if the island is supposed to be inhabited :D

That looks beautiful, maybe add a few plants and little things here and there.

Maybe even a little boat dock if the island is supposed to be inhabited :D
I agree

Reconsidering criticism after Eksi's pics, which show the archway better. The dirt also seems better now, whether or not you actually changed it up a bit.

Work on making the second, larger island not extremely flat, and terraform the terrain so its more interesting. Plate over the dirt, or fillcan it green.

42/50


Image batch from one of my visits there.






Suddenly an island out of nowhere



I don't really like the shape of your islands. I want more cracks and indentations or w/e you call it.

i think the main island you're connecting it to should have some sort of, uhh
how do i say it
upside down ice cream cone shape? :I

i think the main island you're connecting it to should have some sort of, uhh
how do i say it
upside down ice cream cone shape? :I
I love you
You just gave me a pretty amazing idea

I don't really like the shape of your islands. I want more cracks and indentations or w/e you call it.
cracks? what do you mean by that?
I do think that the sharp is too smooth if thats what you are talking about

It's just pretty flat for an island, is what I think sleven is getting at.

It's just pretty flat for an island, is what I think sleven is getting at.
ah, anyway I really planned that one to be forested the most out of them all, but I do plan on adding more that just what you see to that island

ah, anyway I really planned that one to be forested the most out of them all, but I do plan on adding more that just what you see to that island
They're talking about the natural water erosion that happens to an island in its formation, your archway is one of those geological formations that occurs. They want to have some coves, bays, harbors, inlets, swamps, things that would happen naturally if an island had experienced a million or so years of wear and tear.

Thats what I think they mean...