Haha, that was funny. Your first one was actual really good. The way you talked pretty fasted made it sound like the detective didn't really want to deal with the criminal and just push him out of the way. Whether it was intended or not, good job.
oyay, thanks. if you want me to help out with anything, I'm available! It was intended, by the way. and if you need me to speak in a different voice for something I'm also flexible - that was just a demonstration of my standard speaking tone.