Its good, really good
then the ending was kinda cheesy :C
This is pretty good, but if his eyes were just all pupils and his voice was high pitched I'd merely suspect he was possessed by an anime character or something... Either way this is pretty good but
Being stabbed in the hand wouldn't ruin it. It'd be a really stuffty hand with scars and stuff but it'd still be attached to your arm... Kind of...
Also, do people REALLY play 'bloody knuckles' at bars? That seems like a immature high-schooler thing.
Remember, Rob had unhuman strength.
Super glue and Bandaids.
Rob was possessed by the fork,
I liked the story, I'll still sleep tonight, but atleast you got me to smile in awe at the end. Good work.
okay I'm sorry but that just sounds really hilarious out of context