Author Topic: My first Creepypasta.  (Read 2424 times)


This is pretty good, but if his eyes were just all pupils and his voice was high pitched I'd merely suspect he was possessed by an anime character or something... Either way this is pretty god but
then the ending was kinda cheesy :C

This is pretty good, but if his eyes were just all pupils and his voice was high pitched I'd merely suspect he was possessed by an anime character or something... Either way this is pretty good but

As I said, the ending was kind of supposed to be cheesy.

Being stabbed in the hand wouldn't ruin it. It'd be a really stuffty hand with scars and stuff but it'd still be attached to your arm... Kind of...

Being stabbed in the hand wouldn't ruin it. It'd be a really stuffty hand with scars and stuff but it'd still be attached to your arm... Kind of...

Remember, Rob had unhuman strength.

You can't really make forks scary. Also, do people REALLY play 'bloody knuckles' at bars? That seems like a immature high-schooler thing.

Also, do people REALLY play 'bloody knuckles' at bars? That seems like a immature high-schooler thing.

It's just for the story, here.


Super glue and Bandaids.

Rob was possessed by the fork, and it gave him superhuman strength.

I liked the story, I'll still sleep tonight, but atleast you got me to smile in awe at the end. Good work.

Rob was possessed by the fork,
okay I'm sorry but that just sounds really hilarious out of context

I liked the story, I'll still sleep tonight, but atleast you got me to smile in awe at the end. Good work.

Thanks. c:

okay I'm sorry but that just sounds really hilarious out of context

lol you're right



Bump for the suckiest pasta on the front page (theepicman's)