Need a good love poem

[Dezcaban]

lol op is cute

[Ad Bot]

[Darkness ZXW]

it'll get you a nice relationship with a nice girl
unless your crush is a complete slut she'll  be impressed by a good poem

yeah

but most people think that writing a good enough poem will get you love

also here's a good one i just made up:

you are a huge cunt
and i'm a loser
so go roll me a blunt
and i'll be your abuser

boom quad rhyme

[Elecro]

I don't want love, I want compassion. I love her, and she's all I want.

[Mordius]

Roses Are Red
My Name is Dave
I love you
Microwave

[Dezcaban]

but most people think that writing a good enough poem will get you love

most people competent enough to write a good poem will actually value a relationship beyond love

I don't want love, I want compassion. I love her, and she's all I want.

grgrgr silly goose

[Darkness ZXW]

most people competent enough to write a good poem will actually value a relationship beyond love

good point

[Elecro]

Did anyone read it?

[Darkness ZXW]

Did anyone read it?

it's a sweet poem but you should probably make it rhyme every other line

also it's kinda cliched

[Dezcaban]

what does she look like and why do you like her

[Darkness ZXW]

Your eyes light up my life,
your personality warms my heart,
my love for you is rife
this poems speaks my feelings for you,
and truly I say,
I love you.

something more like this i think is better

[Elecro]

what does she look like and why do you like her

she has a great personality and i could give you her facebook if you want as long as you don't stalk her.

[Planr]

she has a great personality and i could give you her facebook if you want as long as you don't stalk her.

...I don't think that's a good idea.

[Böltster]

poems are so last century

just write her a note, way less gay

[Elecro]

poems are so last century

just write her a note, way less gay

Poetry expresses emotions such as love, it's a simple way.

[Böltster]

Poetry expresses emotions such as love, it's a simple way.

you're 13

you don't actually know what love is

note is the way to go