I wrote a poem today, constructive criticism for me?

[rockslide26]

Alright, today I was feeling kinda stuffty, so I decided to sit down and write something in one of my notebooks. After 20 or so minutes, I had the following poem all written out as you'll see it. Can I get some constructive criticism on my writing and how to improve it?

JACK-O-LANTERNS

My Jack O’ Lanterns lay on the shelf
Down in the basement
I made them myself

Take a man’s head
Spoils of war
Pull out the brains
It can be quite a chore

Gouge out the eyes
Break off the nose
Pop out the teeth so the mouth cannot close

Carve a big smile
Ear to ear
More frightful than a gourd
Conveying even more fear

You have the trimmings
A face scary as any
Do you want some?
I have far too many

[Ad Bot]

[Planr]

Whoa

That's actually really good. Would've done great for halloween.

[WALK2222]

I like it!

[rockslide26]

Whoa

That's actually really good. Would've done great for halloween.

Thanks! This did come a little bit late though

I like it!

Thank you c:

[fawkes..]

I like it, actually quite good! Well done!

[SWAT One]

Wow, great job.

Everything is good IMO except the meter in stanza four.

[ThinkInvisible]

Wow, great job.

Everything is good IMO except the meter in stanza four.

And five, yeah.
Timing looks just a liiitle bit off. Words are too big to fit.

Other than that it's great!

[rockslide26]

And five, yeah.
Timing looks just a liiitle bit off. Words are too big to fit.

Other than that it's great!

Stanza five is the most awkward now looking back, I guess I guess I'll just change the wording around a bit

I like it, actually quite good! Well done!

Thanks c: