Music, kinda..

[Clon35]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EY6nb7l0YHs

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I made it!

This is my FIRST (real) song i ever made..

No, its not suppose to be super awesome n stuff, so no h8 plz.

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[Big Brother]

you expect no hate? if so, why did you post it

there is gonna be hate everywhere lol


sounds pretty good though so nice job

[NalNalas]

Good for a first song.

[*FacePalm*]

Hey, this is pretty nice.

[Jerkface]

I don't like it...  it ends with your basic melody still continuing.  It just ends.  Also, the melody shifts in a few spots to a weird alternate key, so it confuses the listener a bit.

Anyway, next time add this to Creativity.  You'll get more people who want to listen to music and stuff there.

[Funnelcakes]

The first few seconds remind me of being a child and pretending I knew what I was going playing the piano

[Clon35]

I don't like it...  it ends with your basic melody still continuing.  It just ends.  Also, the melody shifts in a few spots to a weird alternate key, so it confuses the listener a bit.

Anyway, next time add this to Creativity.  You'll get more people who want to listen to music and stuff there.

I don't know how to end a song and its my FIRST time.

[Lizzy]

It's little too much of the same thing over and over, I can't think of the word. But it's pretty good if it's your first.

[Jerkface]

I don't know how to end a song and its my FIRST time.

My first songs ended nicely...  ending a song isn't really the hard part.

[Lizzy]

Shouldn't this be in Creativity? Just a passing a thought.

[Jerkface]

Shouldn't this be in Creativity? Just a passing a thought.

I already stated that.