I've updated the lyrics to work a bit better and hopefully flow better too. If you think this isn't good or it still needs improvement, please leave suggestions. I am not musically talented and I would appreciate help with this. Telling me it doesn't work isn't exactly real helpful.
And if it's about the syllables, the only thing wrong with the syllables is that "I love Blockland" is one syllable short, but that can be stretched to fit just fine. Otherwise, everything is perfect beat-wise.