Stories you wrote as a kid (lengthy)

[The Tavros Nitram]

I wrote a lot of stories as a kid.
this was to get into a school

THE MUTANT WARS




CHARACTERS

Joe Herman – Afkoshlian Republic leader
richard Jarrel – Government official
Alice T. Lock – USW leader
Sam Lock – USW government official
Commander Jack Long – Peacemaker
Private Simmons – Peacemaker
Soldier 1 – USW soldier
Soldier 2 – USW soldier

VEHICLES/OBJECTS

USSW Exchange – United States of Southern Whitman planet breaker
USS Afkoshlia – Fighter ship, most common in Act 1 scene 2
USS Herman – planet breaker, named after builder Joe Herman
AGL-16 – Automatic Grenade Launcher, common on Fighter Ships.
PD-47 – Portal Device gun, causes portals to form.



















ACT ONE
(SCENE ONE)


(Joe Herman walks into the scene, a press conference.  Over 300 people wait in front of him.)
J. Herman: I have some startling news today (*camera zooms in*)
Reporter: Yes? Go on, go on!
J. Herman: Well… USSW soldiers have moved in on Capital 6…
Reporter: What are they doing there?
J. Herman: They told us they’ve heard news of some… unidentified object in the area.
Reporter: What kind of object?
J. Herman: Mutant, maybe.
Person 1: Mutant? Is there a specific type of mutant here?
J. Herman: A human one, supposedly hit by a virus –
Person 1: Green Fever?
J. Herman: Possibly…
(Private Simmons, a young, fresh soldier, walks onto the stage. Everyone goes silent. They’d seen this before, during the first initial outbreak of Green Fever.)
Private Simmons (whisper): Herman, your honor, listen, Jarrel came in with the stuff you asked for.
J. Herman: Good, good, but now’s not the time.
Private Simmons (whisper): That’s why I came.
J. Herman (uneasy chuckle): To disturb me?
Private Simmons (whisper): No. USW soldiers have  moved forward to capital six. Weren’t there fourteen soldiers?
J. Herman: Yes, I believe.
Private Simmons (whisper): Six remain, sir. It is the green fever. It’s hit again.
J. Herman (uneasy chuckle): You… y-you’ve got to be kidding me.
Private Simmons (whisper): No, sir. I’m serious.
J. Herman: Oh lord. Go, at once. Call Jack Long, tell him to call in a squadron to go to capital 5.
Private Simmons: Yes sir.
J. Herman: (turns to audience once again) It has been confirmed. The green fever hits again!
Panicked audience: God! G-god no!
Man 1: The children! Capital 6 is down?!
Man 2: We’re toast!
Woman 1: Not the Green Fever! What will we do?
Man 1: We can’t do anything but pack and get out of here ASAP!
Man 2: It seems as if the world is ending.
Man 1: Yes, the second is never better than the first.

ACT ONE
(SCENE TWO)

J. Herman: Ah, okay, calm down folks.
Man 1: Calm down? Are you kidding me? The worst virus since 1965 –
J. Herman: This planet didn’t exist until scientists found it in 2016.
Man 1: Sir, you may be our leader, but…
J. Herman: We’ll be fine. I’ve sent a couple troops –
Man 1: A couple of troops?!
J. Herman: All we had remaining, sorry.
Man 1: Perfect.
J. Herman: Get him out of here.
Woman 1: Any other news?
J. Herman: Well… yes.
Woman 1: Speak, please!
J. Herman: The soldiers were sent down to capital 5 to evacuate any remaining humans in the area. I don’t think there were more than 6, a couple men, children, and women. So the soldiers moved to capital 6 on the USS Afkoshlia, and saw an imminent danger as well. There was a new strain of infection hitting the same areas that had been infected, giving the new infected double the power (see prequel, next book.)
Woman 1: Lord.
J. Herman: I’m sorry. We’re closing airports and flights in and out from all of the capitals, and we’re putting martial law into effect – we’re going to evacuate the capitals, as well. The government will do as much as they can.
Woman 1: Is it enough?
J. Herman: I’m afraid not.

ACT ONE SCENE 3

(The news camera is black and white. The screen is shaking.)
Newscaster: J. Herman, our faithful leader,  has backed out of a fatal Green Fever infection.
Newscaster: He says it’s “not enough”.
Newscaster: Can he be trusted, in our maiden voyage into terror?
(a video turns on. Again, it’s black & white, also crackly. Possibly a tabloid, mutant video from Godly Video Editing (GVE), viewers seemed to agree to its content.)
J. Herman: We’re not gonna make it.
J. Herman: If we do not, we will not.
(it goes back to the newscaster. The corrupt video is over.)
Newscaster: The soldiers have made it however.
Newscaster: Let’s pray they succeed. 

ACT TWO, SCENE ONE
(In the small desert between capitals 5 and 6, the two soldiers [Simmons and Long] look at their impending doom.)
Simmons: Well Long, looky here!
Long: Here, gimme this. (grabs binoculars) Huh…
Simmons: What do you think it is?
Long: Definitely an Infected.
Simmons: Should we hunt it?
Long: Might be too dangerous. The infection has caused him to double in size.       
Simmons: Lemme see. (grabs binoculars) Yeah.
Long: Here comes one!
Simmons: Holy cow we gotta run!
Long: (pulls Simmon’s shirt collar) No.
Simmons: What the heck?
Long: They only attack those who are moving. Stay still and quiet.
Simmons: Sure thing, Long. I ain’t movin’ a thing.


ACT TWO, SCENE TWO
(Simmons brings out a PD-47, and Long brings out an AGL-16.)
Simmons: (roosters the PD) Got it, got it. Let’s do it!
Long: (brings out AGL) I’d say no, but I guess I’ve got no choice.
Simmons: C’mon, old man!
Long: Now don’t waste the battery now, young one.
Simmons: Whatever.
Long: (roosters AGL) C’mon.
(they walk towards the Caught and the Hen.)
Long: Shh.
Mutant: GREEACHGGGH LSHHHGGH
Long: Ah, heck.
Simmons: Dang it, what can we do?
Long: Not much.
Simmons: I swear, this is bad.
Long: You think?
Simmons: Listen, I know what to do. Stand here. (points)
Long: Why should I?
(Simmons holds up the PD-47)
Simmons: Look what I have.
Long: Oh yeah.
Simmons: Did you forget what it does?
Long: Heck no. Just forgot you had it. We have to get upstairs.
Simmons: Easy.
Long: Yeah, just put a portal underneath me and one on the wall on the second story patio.
Simmons: Easy enough, I guess –
Long: I’ll get the thing from upstairs.
Simmons: Remember when we used to go play poker at the Club?
Long: Yeah, but now I don’t care about it.
Simmons: Nice.
Long: Nice?!
Simmons: Just get on the portal.
Long: But—Ok.
Simmons: I almost thought you wouldn’t, old man.
(Long walks onto the portal. He shifts back and forth.)
Long: I don’t like this.
Simmons: Stay right there… Good!
(The portal is opened, and Long flies through.)
Simmons: Good job!
Long: Thanks.
Simmons: Ok, now shoot the things behind ---
Mutant: GRSAGGH
Long: Dang, that thing is angry! Better blast it.
Simmons: Do it, man, do it!
(the GL shoots about five bullets. BLAM! The mutant drops down on the floor.)
Long: Go! Move downstairs! I’ll cover you!
Simmons: Yes sir!
Long: Make sure an infected doesn’t leap and get you.
Mutant: GRASAGGHAHH
Long: Run man run!
( The mutant pounces on Long)
Long: AAAAAAHHH !!!!
Simmons: Hold on I’ll get you! (launches portal underneath Long and one on the ceiling)
(Long launches grenade)
Long: Thanks, man! That’s one less zombie we’ll have to worry about.
Simmons: Sure is. Now we’ve got to hope the virus doesn’t spread
faster than our ability to take them down.
Long: Looks like it’s going to be a long night Simmons.

Simmons: It looks like it’s going to be a long year.



To Be Continued…

[Ad Bot]

[The Tavros Nitram]

Wrote this when I was 11
pretty advanced stuff yo




Man




Beneath the
highway
 
he lies with
stones and nails

dreaming in
the little shade

clothes torn
half worn

drinking from
plastic bottles

[Snaffle J. Bean]

this was to get into a school

You had to write a story to get into a school? wut

[The Tavros Nitram]

You had to write a story to get into a school? wut

auditions.

[Mega-Bear]

Jirue's Danger Zone is a very good read...

Coincidentally it was posted the day I joined the forum.

[Tudoreleuu]

Jirue's Danger Zone is a very good read...

Coincidentally it was posted the day I joined the forum.

oh god lol

[weaver123]

When I was little I wrote a story about a baby that was a serial killer. If I ever find it I'll post.

[Mega-Bear]

This is the first paragraph of a story I wrote when I was about ten.

It was December 7th, 1996, and ‘Operation: Ness Drain’ had been commenced. Basically, a clan called ‘CCC clan’ has decided to, without permission of the government, drain Loch Ness, in search of the legendary Nessie. If your wondering what ‘CCC’ stands for, it means ‘Cryptid Catching Cryptozoologists’ . Not the name that I would have went for. “Haverson!” My clan leader yelled. “Get to the docks, drainage will occur in 0500!” “Roger!” I barked. Sometimes my leader doesn’t even seam like a leader. He seems more like a crazy guy who is obsessed with these mythical creatures. That’s right, I don’t believe in Cryptids, yet I’m hunting them. It really isn’t that bad, in fact, if we catch a Cryptid and turn it into the government, we get 3.5 billion dollars. I figured that I had better get to the docks before my leader decides to proceed without me. After all, I am the controls officer… I make it all happen, unfortunately, I have to pay for it all.  (3 minutes later) “Leader Mitch!” I barked, straightened up and then saluted. Standard issue stuff.

[Kimon]

Here's a quote from another topic:

Alright I found it. There was only one but I'm like crying while I'm typing this. The following is exactly what I had written. Literally, If you think you see a typing error it's from the actual thing.

"THE ICE CREAM MISSION"

  (Ooooh boyy.)
"Holy crap! What is that?" I exclaimed. A giant, mutated, bloodthirsty rat-roosterroach thing was hissing at me. Then again, it wasn't the first freakishly radiated-mutated-thing after the nuclear war. The whole world was falling apart after the nuke, really. Quickly I ran from the abandoned grocery store. I stopped to catch my breath. It was dangerous, but I needed the ice cream. It may seem ridiculous, but ice cream healed radiation. Well, at least the tastiest way. Radiation, or RAD, is the stuff that mutated that rat-roach because of the fallout of the nuke. Pure water is also rare and a way to cure radiation. Unfortunately, now I to go back to the starting town and tell that I had failed to get the RAD-away. (Medicine that cures radiation.) I don't know why I had to get ice cream instead but I thought it was worth the trip. (YOU DUMB forget YOU'VE KILLED THEM ALL) By the way, I'm -name-, 10 year old apocalypse survivor and I live in a small, Old West looking town. I had to go south all the way to another town, which was infested with bandits. I sighed and looked at my Pip-Boy. A Pip-Boy was basically an oversized watch that could do almost anything. the Pip-Boy said I was facing west. I had to go completely north to get to my town. I almost hesitated to leave (Oh my god what) when suddenly I head footsteps. I couldn't take any chances so I quickly ran away.I followed the road north until I was in a danger zone. I decided not to get eaten alive by giant-man-eating-butterflies and put my Pip-Boy on Stealth-Boy mode. The camo wasn't great, but it was enough to get by the monsters. Hearing the hiss of a monster, I started walking.(I'M SORRY YOU WHAT? Also there's no space between the period and the sentence again.)After a while of walking I finally came up to a fresh water valve. the bad part was, there are ALOT of monsters attracted to the valve. (Son of a bitch did I really say 'alot' in all caps? It's not even a word.)Then it hit me. Fresh water! I grabbed a few buckets and filled them with water. I guess they wont be disappointed, I thought as I ran back with buckets of water.

THAT.     WAS.

As said in the topic and in the story I made it when I was, like, 10. All typing errors were intentional blah blah.

[Mega-Bear]

That's one bad ass ten-year-old.

[RagnaTheBroedge]

i've been writing since i was nine having produced 4ish novels and countless short stories
it'd be kind of impossible/unnecessary to post them here o3o

shameless self plug goes where?

[DJ Dash3r]

from when I was 9.

hi this is my storyes ok

one day john was walk in park and he was satting on a bench to eating food and giving food to pigoens while jnoh was nt looking a man sneaked up behine and shuved john in to gruond and john dead this is the end of story ok done.

I don't even know why.

SHOVE IT NUBUBV IT

[Shell]

http://imgur.com/a/E5KkV#0

I make the best stories.

[Derroith]

Why did you smash an acoustic guitar for no reason. I also loved how it turned into a Lamborghini.

[Skull Candy]

When I was a kid, I wrote a story that was similar to ALIEN, one of my all time favorite films.