Blockland Video Idea

[Maxx_]

So randomly last night I dreamed of a video idea for blockland.

It is where a gang of people, that are from five years in the future, come to the present and attempt to kill a person who caused a law to be passed where guns are only usable in the military. Due to a other gang shooting the person who originally was meant to be killed due to creating a company that beats any type of tablet or mobile device. The person was a millionaire for making the products, and was attempted to be robbed by the gang and finally after, attempted to kill the person. About a year later the gang from 5 years ahead of time comes into the present, and attempts to kill that person, resulting in a chase to capture and kill the person. When this never succeeds, the gang finally gets a sniper and goes back to when the person was in elementary school. The kid gets on the bus leaving for his school, while he is at school the principal issues a code red lockdown on the entire school. The team of people find the kid and attempt to kill him. Only for one of the gang members to be a complete idiot, and shoot the sniper in the leg, only to cause the sidearm of that same person to be dropped on the floor, The kid, using his mind due to playing alot of FPS shooters, makes a pause thinking if he was really going to shoot that person, the kid dives for the gun (timescale slowed down) and grabs it,
the kid chokes, but pulls the trigger, 3 times, so only the idiot guy who shot the gang member in the leg, survives, and runs away out of the school. Clip fades to black, and police cars arrive. The clip fades to black, and a replay of the events that happened in the whole film start playing, at the end, a voice whispers "MY SON.". Credits then play.

So, how does it sound? If so, please tell if you think some parts should be changed, and or some should be removed.
Rate a 1/10, I didn't come up with it, I had been dreaming it. And remembered today.

Actors:
Me
Bester Bageler
Nidos
VincentTheGuy (Voice actor as well as acting)
Torin0101
Blooker
Mauritsio
Grassy (also voice acting as well as acting)
Xolerate
Yogi
Redconer (Also voice acting as well as acting)

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[Maxx_]

I also have been thinking to making this into a actual video.
I do need actors, no application to be one though.

[-Pablo-]

Usually the video ideas that I get from sleeping turn out to be my best work. I say go for it!

[The Resonte!]

holy crap
you got that from dreaming?
you have the best dreams
to be honest it could be made into a movie

but yeah its great
8.something/10

but yeah good luck with acting

[Swat 3]

holy crap
you got that from dreaming?
you have the best dreams
to be honest it could be made into a movie

but yeah its great
8.something/10

but yeah good luck with acting

nnnonoo
nonononon

You cannot put decimals in fractions.

it contradicts itself

times it by 100!

8something/100
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[Maxx_]

Also need some voice actors.
Add me on skype, its thebigmaxx.
Also, when there is a certain part, for example When there are 5 people in skype call, and 1 or 2 is only being used, Please do not talk when I start a scene with certain people from the skype call.

[Maxx_]

Also, I need some people to help build.
Please tell me how good your skill is 1/10

[Freek]

some of my videos are based off dreams
hence the name, "Freeks Dream"

[Maxx_]

Also, I have no idea what to call it yet.
any ideas on a title?

[Maxx_]

Double post,
Please post whether your going to act or not or build or voice act.
ect. Do NOT pm me.

[Maxx_]

Forgot something, I have to get my blockland working.
I will still make the video, I just have to get my blockland files working.

[Bester Bageler]

Also, I have no idea what to call it yet.
any ideas on a title?

The basic idea is to pull off a murder with time travel. the prefix for time is chrono. the suffix ous implies a given quality. this lets us make the word chronous which means time implied, in this case time travel. So this leads us to the title of "The Plan of Chronous Murder". This fits the story by saying there is a plan for time travel evolved murder. That or "A Chronous Assassination". I could help setbuild if needed. I have acting experience as well.

[Mysteroo]

The basic idea is to pull off a murder with time travel. the prefix for time is chrono. the suffix ous implies a given quality. this lets us make the word chronous which means time implied, in this case time travel. So this leads us to the title of "The Plan of Chronous Murder". This fits the story by saying there is a plan for time travel evolved murder. That or "A Chronous Assassination". I could help setbuild if needed. I have acting experience as well.

asdf I thought you were Glass for a minute there

But yeah that sounds like a great idea for a title

[Maxx_]

The basic idea is to pull off a murder with time travel. the prefix for time is chrono. the suffix ous implies a given quality. this lets us make the word chronous which means time implied, in this case time travel. So this leads us to the title of "The Plan of Chronous Murder". This fits the story by saying there is a plan for time travel evolved murder. That or "A Chronous Assassination". I could help setbuild if needed. I have acting experience as well.

Thats good!
Now titled "The Plan of Chronous Murder"

[Maxx_]

Update! Got blockland working again!