Author Topic: Video Project =UNHALTED=  (Read 1628 times)

So randomly last night I dreamed of a video idea for blockland.

It is where a gang of people, that are from five years in the future, come to the present and attempt to kill a person who caused a law to be passed where guns are only usable in the military. Due to a other gang shooting the person who originally was meant to be killed due to creating a company that beats any type of tablet or mobile device. The person was a millionaire for making the products, and was attempted to be robbed by the gang and finally after, attempted to kill the person. About a year later the gang from 5 years ahead of time comes into the present, and attempts to kill that person, resulting in a chase to capture and kill the person. When this never succeeds, the gang finally gets a sniper and goes back to when the person was in elementary school. The kid gets on the bus leaving for his school, while he is at school the principal issues a code red lockdown on the entire school. The team of people find the kid and attempt to kill him. Only for one of the gang members to be a complete idiot, and shoot the sniper in the leg, only to cause the sidearm of that same person to be dropped on the floor, The kid, using his mind due to playing alot of FPS shooters, makes a pause thinking if he was really going to shoot that person, the kid dives for the gun (timescale slowed down) and grabs it,
the kid chokes, but pulls the trigger, 3 times, so only the idiot guy who shot the gang member in the leg, survives, and runs away out of the school. Clip fades to black, and police cars arrive. The clip fades to black, and a replay of the events that happened in the whole film start playing, at the end, a voice whispers "MY SON.". Credits then play.

So, how does it sound? If so, please tell if you think some parts should be changed, and or some should be removed.
Rate a 1/10, I didn't come up with it, I had been dreaming it. And remembered today.

Actors:
Me
Bester Bageler
Nidos
VincentTheGuy (Voice actor as well as acting)
Blooker
Mauritsio
Grassy (also voice acting as well as acting)
Xolerate
Yogi
Redconer (Also voice acting as well as acting)
As you may know, I have came up with a video idea that I want to push into youtube.
So as of right now, I need some builders.
I currently have 1, and that is Zay.
If you want to build, tell me and think of what your building skill is on 1/10 scale.

Actors:
Me
Bester Bageler
Nidos
VincentTheGuy (Voice actor as well as acting)
Blooker
Mauritsio
Grassy (also voice acting as well as acting)
Xolerate
Fix (Yogi)
Redconer (Also voice acting as well as acting)
AdinX
Sentry (Also voice acting as well as acting)
Going to revive this sometime in the future when I have more time, I have to deal with my tdm.
« Last Edit: April 06, 2013, 12:54:58 AM by Maxx_ »

I'd be glad to help out. I just designed an entire set for abstract and we still need to shoot for his video, but this would be the second video I would be in if you decide to let me help :L

At this point do you only need actors?

Ahem, I had told you I was interested

Ahem, I had told you I was interested
Oh, sorry.
I accidentally might have overseen that.

I will stop being a ass

I will let you know when I am busy though I hate being like this ;~; but I can voice chat maybe some time this weekend

can i be an extra that walks by in the background or something

i just want to be involved

Can I be the good guy that tries to go back in the past after the bad guy?

Also, I can do a kid voice for the kid because I am a kid. You just have to really bother me because I forget these things.

Can I be the good guy that tries to go back in the past after the bad guy?

Also, I can do a kid voice for the kid because I am a kid. You just have to really bother me because I forget these things.
Eh, I seem good for a kid voice IMO, I am only 12.

Change my name from Yogi to Fix please.

SEE KIDS FPS GAME ARE GOOD PLAY THEM LIVE THEM

SEE KIDS FPS GAME ARE GOOD PLAY THEM LIVE THEM
Eh just decided to put that scenario into it.

Sorry I didn't accept your call yesterday, I was probably on tf2 or gmod.
Send me a message and I'll get back to ya ok?

Currently I have some lines down, here they are:
These lines are at the very start of the film.

Quote
*NEWS SCENE*
News Reporter: Hello everyone and welcome to BNN news! On todays topic we have a billionare in products, (name here) has started a company called Blocko Computers has started a insane jump in stock and computing, they currently have made over 20million dollars on their simple desktop computers originally started in 2006, with their OS which is Blocko XP.
They have started making a tablet, which is going to come out this next month, its name is the bPad.
Anyway, more information will be coming soon on this company.
*TV GOES OFF*
*CAMERA PANS TO GANG1*
« Last Edit: March 22, 2013, 01:58:57 PM by Maxx_ »


More lines incoming!
GM are the Gang characters.
GD are the gaurd characters.
Quote
GM1: Boss, what do we do? This guy's a millionare!
GM2: Should we rob him?
GM3: Probably, most likely we can get off the debt and stuff we have to pay for that other gang. Or we're dead.
GM2: When is the timing?
GM3: I have to plan it. We don't have long, we should do it tomorrow night, when it closes.
*CLIP FADES IN AND OUT TO NEW SCENE*
*SCENE OF  BLOCKO COMPUTERS*
GM3: Alright, let me check if the coast is clear, we can get so much money off of this.
*GM3 LOOKS AROUND CORNER, SEES GAURDS*
GM3: Great!, we got gaurds up ahead, *POINTS AT GM2* you go knife em.
*GM2 WALKS BEHIND THE GAURDS*
GM2: *mutters to himself* Say goodnight.
*GM2 Stabs both gaurds in the spine*
*ALARM GOES OFF*
GM2: Oh sh*t!
*3 OTHER GAURDS START RUNNING OUT OF BUILDING*
GD1: Put your hands up now!
GD2: GET ON THE GROUND
*GD3 SEES GM 3 AND 1*
*GM 3 AND 1 GET SHOT IN THE HEAD BY GD 3*
*GM 2 IS HANDCUFFED*
GD2: Gotcha, now what is your beef with Blocko Productions? You have every right to be shot, before I stake a knife in your head.
GM2: Go to hell! You won't get stuff from me!
*GD2 SHOOTS GM2 IN THE HEAD*
GD2: We got em!
GD3: We should send them to the hospital, to take a autopsy.
GD1: Good thing they got shot before they could breach the store.
*CLIP FADES*
Give a 1/10, and tell me if I should change lines.

More lines incoming!
GM are the Gang characters.
GD are the gaurd characters.Give a 1/10, and tell me if I should change lines.
For this part I will need some voice actors. Not sure how many, but like 4-6.