Author Topic: Off the Job [Video | 4:34] (Read 1484 times)

Subpixel · April 19, 2013, 10:26:01 PM

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Off the Job
Length: 00:04:34
Published on April 19, 2013
Description:
A man gets fired, and ends up turning his life around. Short pantomime film by Zapk.
Special Thanks to Warthog BL_ID 6237 for his help acting.

warning: it will make you cry :'(

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PurpleMetro · April 19, 2013, 11:06:41 PM

Very nice story. The music really helped.

Igloos · April 19, 2013, 11:54:48 PM

EXCELLENT job on the filming. I love how this only uses facial expressions; and not text or voice acting.

-Kyle · April 20, 2013, 01:21:43 AM

lol at 3:45

Very good film.

Subpixel · April 20, 2013, 03:04:51 PM

Quote from: Igloos on April 19, 2013, 11:54:48 PM

EXCELLENT

Quote from: -Kyle on April 20, 2013, 01:21:43 AM

Very good

Quote from: PurpleMetro on April 19, 2013, 11:06:41 PM

Very nice

:-)

Siren · April 21, 2013, 09:19:11 AM

First video in a while I actually enjoyed watching.

Critism:

Pulling the shotgun out of nowhere was a bad move, it made it look like you were trying to be funny where the majority of the movie was more on the serious side.
Would have been nicer if you used something other than default builds, but you did use them quite nicely.
Might want to use some more actors next time to make the city feel more alive.

Other than that a great video.

Sleven · April 22, 2013, 11:26:44 AM

Nice shots, very nice acting, nice ambiance and use of light.

Especially liked the cop car shots.

What's the music?

Subpixel · April 22, 2013, 07:07:55 PM

Quote from: Sleven on April 22, 2013, 11:26:44 AM

Nice shots, very nice acting, nice ambiance and use of light.

Especially liked the cop car shots.

What's the music?

Bach -- Prelude in C major

Thanks for the criticism guys! I wouldn't call myself a very good writer though, so I'll be willing to make scripts you can write into videos.

PrototypeCow · April 23, 2013, 02:16:37 AM

THANK YOU FOR NO TERRIBLE VOICE ACTING. You mae it so that the viewer has to assume the plot which is 5X better than random people trying their hand at voice acting. Bravo!

Mr.Noßody · April 23, 2013, 03:00:34 AM

It could have been much more powerful..

Igloos · April 23, 2013, 03:21:59 AM

Quote from: PrototypeCow on April 23, 2013, 02:16:37 AM

THANK YOU FOR NO TERRIBLE VOICE ACTING. You mae it so that the viewer has to assume the plot which is 5X better than random people trying their hand at voice acting. Bravo!

I agree, Blockland shorts/skits don't need voice acting; especially when all the voices are cracked and yucky.

Sylvanor · April 23, 2013, 08:45:43 PM

this is good yes!

Subpixel · April 29, 2013, 08:22:39 PM

Added a version with voices
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=frpfc1cksTs