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Author Topic: WinterBite Ch3: Strongholds Bloody Course [RP] [CH3 Started!!!]  (Read 234386 times)



[I dunno if im an overlord or just kinda cool
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Just kinda cool

Application
:cookie: :cookie:  
In game name: Sub Zero
BLid: 33323
Yes i have read the storyline
I have Pretty good roleplay experience  :nes:  :iceCream:  :nes: :nes:
Character name: Ellis Fenton
Character age: 15
Gender: Male
Future Ambitions: Try to expand the bandit group
Skills: Scavenging, weaponry, speech, sneak, and bartering
Character appearance: Is usually wearing a hood, is short, has no facial hair, and is usually wearing a block mesah shirt, under unbuttoned, black button shirt, with black shoes and pants, is american.
Backstory: Parents died when he was five, bandits found him and tried to get him into their group, after 3 years, finally joined and is pretty skilled at some essential things, has few friends and is mostly goes out on his own.
Faction hopes to join: Bandits.
Im going to tell you what Portal would probably(so don't go apestuff if I'm wrong) tell you: You need to make the Backstory longer.

Im going to tell you what Portal would probably(so don't go apestuff if I'm wrong) tell you: You need to make the Backstory longer.
Fire, let portal judge it himself.

why bring this up again after 7 months gone /p-p/

« Last Edit: October 06, 2013, 06:21:12 PM by bman773 »

-emotespammyeyesareburningrightnowgetthatstuffouttamyfacesnip-
I think Portal would be bothered by that emote spam...

Sorry to bother you (if i am) but how long should it take for me to get a reply on my application  :cookie:  :cookie:  :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie:
cookie for u!COOKEH FOR UUUU
woah man cookie spam :(

Sorry to bother you (if i am) but how long should it take for me to get a reply on my application  :cookie:  :cookie:  :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie: :cookie:
cookie for u!COOKEH FOR UUUU
lel thnx 3 teh cukiez h3re u gu!!1 :cookieMonster: :cookieMonster: :cookieMonster: :cookieMonster:
oh n0 he stule them!

I don't really know how to respond to this one.

I'm just going to be nice and calm and say nope.

D: dude, i loved this but ever since you added that stupid white list i cant play....... thats why i hate u now, jk, but srsly plz let me on, if so then  :cookie:


I'm just going to be nice and calm and say nope.
How is saying no nice anyway?

How is saying no nice anyway?
Cause of all the emote spam you posted, it would've said it in a much more.."aggressive" fashion, so in this case "nope" is nice.
D: dude, i loved this but ever since you added that stupid white list i cant play....... thats why i hate u now, jk, but srsly plz let me on, if so then  :cookie:
Then come up with a better character and stop spamming emotes

Cause of all the emote spam you posted, it would've said it in a much more.."aggressive" fashion, so in this case "nope" is nice.Then come up with a better character and stop spamming emotes
My character is fine the way it is, and BTW, BTW, Im NEW here, so dont expect the best of me

Frostbite on Hiatus until approx winter.

My character is fine the way it is, and BTW, BTW, Im NEW here, so dont expect the best of me
You're not new to the god-damn world. We shouldn't treat you like the special little monkey who jumps on the bed you think you are. Portal wants serious roleplayers who can roleplay dynamically and effectively. Your whitelist application was terrible because it has a very terrible backstory, and was really short.
Backstory: Parents died when he was five, bandits found him and tried to get him into their group, after 3 years, finally joined and is pretty skilled at some essential things, has few friends and is mostly goes out on his own.
If you can't even do math; 5 plus 1 (leaving a gap in when the bandits finds him, assuming he magically didn't die due to hunger/hypothermia in Alaska by living with a pack of wolves) plus 3 is not 15 years.

Also, this isn't Skyrim:
Skills: Scavenging, weaponry, speech, sneak, and bartering
I have a feeling since you're so edgy by spamming emotes, your speech skill will increase, magically increasing the chance of intimidating Portal:
D: dude, i loved this but ever since you added that stupid white list i cant play....... thats why i hate u now, jk, but srsly plz let me on, if so then  :cookie:

Application
:cookie: :cookie: 
In game name: Sub Zero
BLid: 33323
Yes i have read the storyline
I have Pretty good roleplay experience  :nes:  :iceCream:  :nes: :nes:
Character name: Ellis Fenton
Character age: 15
Gender: Male
Future Ambitions: Try to expand the bandit group
Skills: Scavenging, weaponry, speech, sneak, and bartering
Character appearance: Is usually wearing a hood, is short, has no facial hair, and is usually wearing a block mesah shirt, under unbuttoned, black button shirt, with black shoes and pants, is american.
Backstory: Parents died when he was five, bandits found him and tried to get him into their group, after 3 years, finally joined and is pretty skilled at some essential things, has few friends and is mostly goes out on his own.
Faction hopes to join: Bandits.
Also, forget you, that's Nathan's job.  :cookieMonster:
« Last Edit: October 06, 2013, 07:46:04 PM by Swat 3 »