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Author Topic: Thief Unit -TRIPLE WHAMMY-  (Read 181714 times)

Not exactly in favor
There will be no season three because I have been doing this for two seasons, and I think it would mostly likely die out by season 3.
Also I always get a bunch of ideas, and the robot idea was one I had for a while, so I'm doing it instead
I will hope that it will not have less quality then the current adventure.

Alright.

I guess that you're now going to stop this, it's time for me to... admit something.

I really didn't like this adventure. Don't get me wrong, I really like your art, but I think the plot and the character development in the story was quite poor. As I read the first season without seeing it update, I felt it went way too quickly, and I didn't really care when anyone died. I didn't even "root" for anyone, which is something that the reader should be able to do whilst reading a story like Forum Island. The easiest solution would be to try to develop the characters, and give them backstories that make them feel more lifelike, along with adding some more dialogue. You can still have lots of action and death, but a little bit more plot would be great.

I really hope to see more from you, Legoboss! ^u^

Alright.

I guess that you're now going to stop this, it's time for me to... admit something.

I really didn't like this adventure. Don't get me wrong, I really like your art, but I think the plot and the character development in the story was quite poor. As I read the first season without seeing it update, I felt it went way too quickly, and I didn't really care when anyone died. I didn't even "root" for anyone, which is something that the reader should be able to do whilst reading a story like Forum Island. The easiest solution would be to try to develop the characters, and give them backstories that make them feel more lifelike, along with adding some more dialogue. You can still have lots of action and death, but a little bit more plot would be great.

I really hope to see more from you, Legoboss! ^u^
Okey
Why did you only want to admit this now? You could of done that at any time
Second, most of the characters were either robots, jerks, or self-centered rich people.
Not much to make it life-like, either, considering that I don't chose the actions, the people who made them do.
It went quickly, again of the choices, but also because there were few contestants.

The first season was meant to be more of an action story, and I suppose the second as well
There isn't much of a way to get attached to a black object with a smile that enjoys watching people suffer, or someone with a stretched out face who likes children.

Again, it mostly depends on the characters actions chosen by the Community.
« Last Edit: July 24, 2013, 07:20:57 PM by Legoboss »

what?
The adventure is still continuing
Just after season 2 new adventure


So can my character join the new adventure?

So can my character join the new adventure?
I don't think
You understand
The new adventure
Is not this.

I don't think
You understand
The new adventure
Is not this.
Sorry for the misunderstanding.
Looking forward to it regardless!

yay I'm dead, now Legoboss can be more stupid in his adventure now
NINJAEDIT: that was the most stupidest and unrealistic death ever
« Last Edit: July 24, 2013, 10:34:03 PM by 1337yeah »

yay I'm dead, now Legoboss can be more stupid in his adventure now
NINJAEDIT: that was the most stupidest and unrealistic death ever
Now your just being idiotic
You sound like so butt hurt right now, it shows right through your post

"Stupid"
"Stupidest"
"Unrealistic Death"
Just leave the topic already, your digging your own hole.

yay I'm dead, now Legoboss can be more stupid in his adventure now
NINJAEDIT: that was the most stupidest and unrealistic death ever
How about you stop complaining and just get out?
You brought this on yourself, and really who knew an unrealistic death would be on an unrealistic adventure!

Now your just being idiotic
You sound like so butt hurt right now, it shows right through your post

"Stupid"
"Stupidest"
"Unrealistic Death"
Just leave the topic already, your digging your own hole.
you must be butthurt too, you blocked my friend requests on Steam

Legoboss is right...

you must be butthurt too, you blocked my friend requests on Steam
I blocked you for being a whiny stuff, and because your last message to me was "blocked"

forget off already 1337yeah

you've been acting insanely immature for quite a while now and it's starting to get on everyone's nerves

>Cobalt: Walk outside

Legoboss is right...
I don't understand
What am I right about?

I don't understand
What am I right about?
Now your just being idiotic
You sound like so butt hurt right now, it shows right through your post

"Stupid"
"Stupidest"
"Unrealistic Death"
Just leave the topic already, your digging your own hole.