Author Topic: Modern House (2nd Build) [Image Heavy]  (Read 5454 times)

Remember my last modern house? If not please check out this build
Link: http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=242778.0


Alright so I build this modern house for you guys Only!
I really want to inspire people out there to build so I decided to release this save.
You guys could do what ever you want with this build because its made for you. The interior is empty so you could put furniture in it.
I really hope you enjoy it and remember to check out my youtube channel here http://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7_UJufVWcyLijewduWm-uA.

A positive comment in this topic or youtube video will make my day 100% better.    All of you guys ROCK!
No matter if I hate you or like you, I love everyone and I want everyone to enjoy, so if you have a problem feel free to comment in this topic and I'll make sure I'll comment it in a heart beat! The interior may be small and I'm sorry since I'm building this in a 16x16 plate.

Feel free to rate x/10 oh and please keep up those positive feed back, remember every positive feed back makes my day 100% better.
    PS Don't mention that its too small because remember that I'm building this on a 16x16 plate.

I hope you enjoy your stay and make sure to take a cookie when your in it.  :cookie:   :)











You guys are the best. I hope you enjoy it and have a good day :)

All made by Hair 18114
« Last Edit: October 09, 2013, 02:25:01 PM by Hair »

Mmm, lovey....................

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Is that a 16z16 baseplete?! wow, nice

   PS Don't mention that its too small because remember that I'm building this on a 16x16 plate.

if its too small, why are you building on a 16x16

but i like it nonetheless


Nice. Especially for just 16x16.

Thank you for the positive feed back

a grand total of 2 colors




so basically grey and brown right?

I'm not saying it had to be a goddamn rainbow, then again it's incredibly awkward to work on a 16x baseplate.  Also your brickwork is extremely awkward, the staircase leads directly into a window and there's a ton of height inconsistency.

And, again, it doesn't really feel like a modern house. The two overhangs on the front look real awkward next to each other. More like a piece of art. It's not proportioned very well.

The work on a 16x16 plate is admirable and it's pretty squared away and tidy, but the brickwork is yikes and the color is nonexistent. Those shades of grey and brown don't really do much justice for each other. The exterior structure looks like you've melded two buildings together.

6/10 from me

I guess you don't understand what "modern" means.

so basically grey and brown right?

I'm not saying it had to be a goddamn rainbow, then again it's incredibly awkward to work on a 16x baseplate.  Also your brickwork is extremely awkward, the staircase leads directly into a window and there's a ton of height inconsistency.

And, again, it doesn't really feel like a modern house. The two overhangs on the front look real awkward next to each other. More like a piece of art. It's not proportioned very well.

The work on a 16x16 plate is admirable and it's pretty squared away and tidy, but the brickwork is yikes and the color is nonexistent. Those shades of grey and brown don't really do much justice for each other. The exterior structure looks like you've melded two buildings together.

6/10 from me

I guess you don't understand what "modern" means.


im seriously doubting whether or not YOU know what modern means

I'm just going to pretend that wasn't passive aggressive as stuff.

Even if I didn't know what modern architecture was all about, your brickwork is still awkward and dull. And yeah, this is not 'modern architecture', this is more towards the side of 'art architecture' and even if that's what you were aiming for, it's still very dull.

Now I get that you probably used a reference from google images, and yes, modern homes have a tenancy to follow a very basic brown / grey color-scheme, but 10/10 times this is made up for in it's flawless architectural design, it's comfy and tidy interior, and it's captivating and squared away surrounding gardens and exterior. You can't build a modern home on a 16x grid.

As an art piece, it's respectable. As a modern home, it needs work. I made a post about this in the last topic and I think you just completely ignored it.

You're probably going to blow off this post because you think it's negative or some stuff, and that's not going to help you improve. The first step to becoming a better builder is getting over yourself and realizing there's room for improvement.

Modern houses have proportion, consistency, symmetry, style and contour. Nothing in the OP is consistent or proportional, you've stitched together about 5 different styles, there's no symmetry, there's no flow. Your doorway doesn't even line up. Your tiles are incorrectly rotated / placed.

If you want my advice for building a modern house: build with a grid in mind. Place the boxes in a way that is symmetrical and proportional. Don't just make it up as you go. You're going to have an extremely difficult time putting a detailed interior as it looks right now. The whole red pillar curved thing is cool but don't just jam your windows and walls into the side of it.