Hats are a bit loud. The dual(?) guitar melodies conflict at some points. Try to make the bass/lower tones more mono. Quiet down (and maybe do a wide bandpass on) the pads. Vary your volume levels a bit more and consider making some parts have more reverb and space; right now, everything seems sort of stacked on top of each other.
Overall though this is extremely well-made. The composition is top notch. Can't wait to hear the finished version. :)
Thanks!
I did try to do a bit of mastering, particularly with the hats. I think I also got a bit more in terms of dynamic range and I did address reverb a bit.
Finished version will be on soundcloud soon. I'm going to present it in class tomorrow and then see if my professor has any final suggestions, so it should be up tomorrow or the day after.
Also stuff did chromebrowser get taken down
EDIT: oh lol you just changed the url ok good nice
One of the things that I really enjoyed about Violence was that one synth with the scrubby attack. It gives it this really nice rhythmic offset.
Congratulations on getting that repost from Hybrid Trap
