I tried my hand at mixing. 'Twas fun.
https://soundcloud.com/lloid-1/mini-mix
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I want you guys' opinions on this
In my mind, here's what would make this the perfect track:
Make the main melody instrument a little more ambient (but not much!) and slightly less like an electric piano, more organic sounding.
The buzzy synth at the end? Lower it an octave, add some width, and lower the volume.
Make the pads more ambient.
Vary the melody's instrument a bit - switch from the original instrument to another and then back again.
Add some foley - chimes, bells, forest sounds, etc - at various places in the song.
This track definitely has potential, keep with it. :)