Starting off; I do admire that you took to time to modify something that you didn't feel happy about, especially one of the default saves, looking at it however it seems you only really added an exterior. The trees look like they have just been duplicated which is sad because they aren't badly built, and if you took the time to build other ones like it; I think the result would be very pleasing. I really dislike that you have used the default cubes to make the land, I think you could benefit a lot from the Modular Terrain pack. (I'll put the link down
below.) To finish on a positive note though; I do like the stone pathway that you added from the front door to the stairs, you should really add one to the garden.
I can't rate this build since you have not posted permission to, if you do then I'll add a rating here. Overall I give it a
6.5/10The link to the Modular Terrain pack which I think would help you:
http://forum.returntoblockland.com/dlm/viewFile.php?id=4900