Author Topic: The Setro house ([H]eight application if possible)  (Read 3199 times)

Hello! I have decided to do my best at building a house. I had recently downloaded more bricks, therefore I was inspired!
I discovered one awesome tip for building: If you download and use more bricks, your build will look better. It's true! These filler bricks made my build look even better, so you would barely see me stack 1x16 bricks for a 1x16x3 wall piece! (If that makes sense, kinda difficult to explain here :c)
Now, without further ado, I present to you, the Setro House! (for lack of a better name)


The living room

The kitchen (best room in the house imo)


The hall upstairs (Amy, come get your journal! Slob!)


Rooms


Exterior


The later-added garage, with my wife's car! (my virtual wife, of course. forever alone)

And yes, the garage door actually functions!
Hope you enjoyed!
Rate x/10, give feedback and constructive criticism, etc.
« Last Edit: January 05, 2014, 03:26:22 PM by xSetrox »

Too much gray, sink is spammy, couch looks odd, exterior is ugly, why is there a vending machine in someone's room and the chair next to the desk is ugly. but I do like how you did the stairs
3/10

Too much gray, sink is spammy, couch looks odd, exterior is ugly, why is there a vending machine in someone's room and the chair next to the desk is ugly. but I do like how you did the stairs
3/10
Too much grey? Grey is like the main color of houses.
How is the sink spammy? I lacked the pole connectors at the time of building.
How is the exterior ugly?
Who says you can't have a vending machine in your room? It's decor.
The chair, I could understand, it looks a bit weird.

The later-added garage, with my wife's car! (my virtual wife, of course. forever alone)
What.

Eh the interior is somewhat decent, but exterior could really use some work. I don't think it'll get you in but I don't really know the clans standards. 3/10
« Last Edit: January 05, 2014, 03:33:07 PM by Ghille »

Too much grey? Grey is like the main color of houses.
How is the sink spammy? I lacked the pole connectors at the time of building.
How is the exterior ugly?
Who says you can't have a vending machine in your room? It's decor.
The chair, I could understand, it looks a bit weird.

No I mean the gray is everywhere, gray isn't a main color, the books, cups are even gray.
you could of used taller bricks for the sink
exterior is ugly because its only red and nothing else

No I mean the gray is everywhere, gray isn't a main color, the books, cups are even gray.
you could of used taller bricks for the sink
exterior is ugly because its only red and nothing else
-If I made the cups a different color they would look weird, like really weird and out of place.
-If I used taller bricks, the sink would look weird in comparison with a player since his/her hands cant reach the sink. That's something we don't really think about in blockland, though.
-Didn't really know how else to make the exterior

please tell me you are joking about the sink, I'm talking about the sink body and not the faucet.
Make the cups transparent

please tell me you are joking about the sink, I'm talking about the sink body and not the faucet.
Make the cups transparent
But I'm not joking around the sink.

it looks ugly because of that

I discovered one awesome tip for building: If you download and use more bricks, your build will look better. It's true! These filler bricks made my build look even better
No. This is not true. Learn how to make the default bricks look good. What you've done here is try to distract the eye from your otherwise very boring house by filling it with a bunch of crap. Non-default bricks should be used to accentuate your build, not cover it up

It's not terrible, you just need to work harder

I discovered one awesome tip for building: If you download and use more bricks, your build will look better. It's true!
no no no no wrong

The walls, ceiling and floors are all very plain on the interior. There's no sign of any type of support on the structure inside. The outside of the house has no detail and doesn't even look remotely close to a house. Also the roof should overhang a bit on the sides like a real house would be.

2/10
« Last Edit: January 05, 2014, 04:13:27 PM by Ravencroft7 »

Looks spammy, rushed, and generally poorly done. There were a few nice touches here and there, but this needs a lot of work. Lacks color, too.

4/10

3/10

how about instead of defending against people's criticism, you take it?

is it bad I've given him the highest rating so far