Author Topic: EDM CLUB  (Read 2777 times)

i made this yesterday

outside the club

main lobby area thingy

Dance floor

VIP stairs

VIP

VIP view

DJ control panel
you can change the colors music and activate the kill floor from this

Dance floor

bathrooms

one of the bathroom stalls

dance floor green

dance floor blue

dance floor yellow



i will be hosting this on a server everyonce in awhile. so just come on and join just to dance to EDM.

so please rate andtell me what you think and how i can make it better

looks a bit simple, but simple isnt a bad things sometimes
also what is edm

ton of neon

i like the way you did the stairs (magical laser poles) but i think it'd be better for simplistic build like this to have a friend take some shader screenshots

especially because you put in some custom prints that stick out

looks a bit simple, but simple isnt a bad things sometimes
also what is edm
edm is electronic dance music.


is this the movie tron legacy


is this the movie tron legacy
no. And if think it sucks that it looks so much like tron. Ohwell

Just get some dancing girls in cages and this will be perfect

Wow, something oroginal :3

Wow, something oroginal :3
yeah because 90% of gallery is all googled and based off of other things

It's nice but it's also unrealistic in a lot of ways, namely the laser FX. Your DJ booth looks like a bunch of buttons all mashed together rather than an actual booth, you overdid it on the neon, and not every room in a club is I-can't-see-my-hands-in-front-of-me dark. The "kill floor" is really... really unnecessary.

- Random lasers and glow are NOT making this look better, it just makes it look like you couldn't think of a way to make it look good.
- Not every room in a club is pitch-black dark, like BATHROOMS for example! It would be great to know where you're pissing, right? Right.
- A killing floor..? Were you running out of options for buttons? C'mon.
- Are you sure it's a DJ booth? Looks to me like a bunch of neon buttons all mashed onto a 2x10 area. Hell, two of your buttons are up-side-down.
- why is everything either dark black or dark grey? Eyestrain much? EDM clubs don't look like that, it's just dark inside but the lighting makes up for it.

If you're going to advertise a server, do it in general discussion. If you post in general discussion, include a list of admins, the music you have downloaded (possibly with download links for faster spawning) and server rules.

yeah because 90% of gallery is all googled and based off of other things

It's nice but it's also unrealistic in a lot of ways, namely the laser FX. Your DJ booth looks like a bunch of buttons all mashed together rather than an actual booth, you overdid it on the neon, and not every room in a club is I-can't-see-my-hands-in-front-of-me dark. The "kill floor" is really... really unnecessary.

- Random lasers and glow are NOT making this look better, it just makes it look like you couldn't think of a way to make it look good.
- Not every room in a club is pitch-black dark, like BATHROOMS for example! It would be great to know where you're pissing, right? Right.
- A killing floor..? Were you running out of options for buttons? C'mon.
- Are you sure it's a DJ booth? Looks to me like a bunch of neon buttons all mashed onto a 2x10 area. Hell, two of your buttons are up-side-down.
- why is everything either dark black or dark grey? Eyestrain much? EDM clubs don't look like that, it's just dark inside but the lighting makes up for it.

If you're going to advertise a server, do it in general discussion. If you post in general discussion, include a list of admins, the music you have downloaded (possibly with download links for faster spawning) and server rules.
thanks. I made this in like an hour so i didnt put much effort into it. I just thought it looked cool so i wanted to show you guys. But now that i think about it i will prolly redo a bunch of it and try to go with a more realistic look like you said. Thanks

dem bargain bin prints
otherwise gr8 build m8

virtual boy all over again

this is just a simple version of what i'm working on
8/10, too much neon.