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[New version now available]
Alright, first one...I had forgotten to read the rules, my bad.
Alright, SilverGhost, not bad of a build your your skill level, needs less spam, name could be different, story needs work for sure.
And that is all I got for my re-made version.
Any problems now?
Once again, sorry about the original post. I forgotten to read the rules, getting used to everything again since my last time I was here.
Plz dont ban.