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Author Topic: The Saints of Endoa – (Ebola is not a joke so please stop treating it that way.)  (Read 5820 times)

I'VE BEEN DOOKED.

Ryaine begins his morning ritual, exercizing, then eating while enjoying the ne-

"Oh my god, I did not slip that poison in that guys wine.

"And I only killed that one guy!" He says dissapointed. He doesn't like to kill people unnessecarily. Obviously the Church wants to make Heretics look evil.

Ryaine puts on a red cloak with pure silver threads, a... "donation", from one of his Church purges. This was a long time ago so no one from a certain Church in a certain city probably doesn't even remember it.

He walks on his normal route, avoiding the markets (as usual), and going into an alleyway for morning, non-Catholic mass. Only a few people meet here, and its more of a "I trust you to not trust me" type of thing. That's why everyone wears cloaks during mass and leave at different times.

-alrightwhatever-
« Last Edit: October 08, 2014, 06:40:27 AM by Jokey365 »

"B'lieve these folks are th' ones of tha' church, Aed'." says Lenart with a idle glance around, scanning over his surroundings carefully once again as he crosses his arms along his chest with a idle tap of his forearm with his right index finger, "My guess be tha' th' most we're gonn' find here is books o' 'bout touchin' kids an'-" but before he can finished his bashful banter, he's cut off as he hears a voice speak up, looking over to lay his eyes upon the acclaimed harbormaster.

Listening to Aedan, and the harbormaster, he blinks lazily, watching the two before he looks to Aedan as Aedan looks to him in turn, "Aye, an th' women." he says, before looking back to the harbormaster. He quietly snickers to himself at Aedans form of counter attack towards the request of a search for contraband, and began to go on his way before he stops, glaring back as he hears the same harbormaster whistle, sallying guards over. "I don' like this." he grumbles to himself quietly, audible to Aedan as he watches them waltz over and onto the ship, the crewman not knowing what the in the bloody hell is going on.

When Aedan asks as to whether they can leave, he sighs when he hears the harbormasters reply. Before letting out a cough at the talk of hours, "forgetin' hell, them northern' boys'll probably be grabbing 'em by then! Come on, at'least be quick 'bout it, I got places to be, women ta' f'ahk!"
"Calm down now, Lenart, we'll be out of here soon enough, aye?" Aedan said, turning to the harbormaster.

A soldier quickly came from below deck and leaned in close to the harbormaster, uttering a few words too quiet to understand.  The harbormaster nodded, his expression was as though he was expecting the message.  He then whispered back to the soldier, and the soldier nodded, leaving in the direction of the city.  Aedan quirked a brow at the master, "Where's he off to then?"

"Do not worry about him," he replied as several of the crewmen could be heard giving the soldiers on the ship hell as they are forced from below deck.

"What the 'ell's going on, then?" Aedan cried angrily at the harbor master.

Soldiers began to march through the docks towards the ship, and the harbormaster finally announced his intentions.  "Your ship has been found to contain substantial amounts of black powder and weapons as well as an ungodly amount of opium.  Your ship and its contents will be held as evidence and you will be transported to the capitol for immediate sentencing -"

"Oh you've got to be fackin' joking!" Aedan shouted angrily.  The guards came quickly, some stayed behind to subdue Lenart and Aedan while the others went to acquire the contraband goods and subdue the ship's crew.

isn't this supposed to be like in italy or somewhere based off of italy in the early 1500's because i'll sure as hell tell you that some richardhead named "Maxwell Meepo" and two britsh speaking forgeters are not from italy

isn't this supposed to be like in italy or somewhere based off of italy in the early 1500's because i'll sure as hell tell you that some richardhead named "Maxwell Meepo" and two britsh speaking forgeters are not from italy
lolno

This is based off of the Reformation of the Catholic Church. This nation is supposed to represent (apparently) the Holy Roman Empire.

This is not really on-track, hence why we aren't reading a textbook.

I wish the people around me understood what was actually going on here. I hate this place.

Once done (before Catholic mass is over), Ryaine goes to the market to buy some fruits for some fruit juice for the poor kids of the slums.

"Calm down now, Lenart, we'll be out of here soon enough, aye?" Aedan said, turning to the harbormaster.

A soldier quickly came from below deck and leaned in close to the harbormaster, uttering a few words too quiet to understand.  The harbormaster nodded, his expression was as though he was expecting the message.  He then whispered back to the soldier, and the soldier nodded, leaving in the direction of the city.  Aedan quirked a brow at the master, "Where's he off to then?"

"Do not worry about him," he replied as several of the crewmen could be heard giving the soldiers on the ship hell as they are forced from below deck.

"What the 'ell's going on, then?" Aedan cried angrily at the harbor master.

Soldiers began to march through the docks towards the ship, and the harbormaster finally announced his intentions.  "Your ship has been found to contain substantial amounts of black powder and weapons as well as an ungodly amount of opium.  Your ship and its contents will be held as evidence and you will be transported to the capitol for immediate sentencing -"

"Oh you've got to be fackin' joking!" Aedan shouted angrily.  The guards came quickly, some stayed behind to subdue Lenart and Aedan while the others went to acquire the contraband goods and subdue the ship's crew.

Lenart glares around, growling angrily as the guards come and subdue him, pinning his arms behind himself and have the blade of pikes to his throat, baring his teeth as he watches the rest of the crew being subdued. "All I forgetin' wanted was some god-damned time t'enjoy a nice pair of ti-" he begins, before he's struck in the side of the head by the metal of steel gauntlets backed by the fist of a guard, prompting a loud 'thunk' to be heard as Lenart staggers to the side, grunting, but remaining conscious, taking the hint and quieting down.

isn't this supposed to be like in italy or somewhere based off of italy in the early 1500's because i'll sure as hell tell you that some richardhead named "Maxwell Meepo"
Yeah, seriously what?  Jokey, if you could maybe make the name more Italian, or just archaic 16th century European or something, you'll be accepted.
and two britsh speaking forgeters
I think it's easily able to tell they're travelers, so I don't mind.
are not from italy
This stuff.



And this stuff:

Marco, after the Mass ends, begins walking home.
"Wait up!"
You turn around to see Maria walking briskly toward you.
"Marco, would you mind walking me home?"
"Uh, yeah, sure.  I don't have a problem with that."

They begin walking next to each other.  Marco feels awkward as the only girls who have ever asked to walk with him have ended up teasing him, or sending their older brothers after him to do him in.  Luckily though, Maria both lives alone, and is the only child of a now very old man, so Marco can't seem to expect any tricks.  He steals a quick glance at her hands.  Nope, no ring.

"Is something the matter?"
"What?!  Oh, no!  I'm fine." Marco says, smiling and laughing awkwardly.

As they cross the bridge spanning the river separating South Imperius and Ferrano, they are forced to pass on the far right when a cart dragged by two oxen passes by, carrying a large cage with at least a score of prisoners inside.  At the top of the cage is a sign reading "Deamons, witches, heretics and sinners."

The cart passes by with the sound of hooves, and the rumbling of the cart wheels against the cobblestone road.

No doubt that these will hang.

After a moment of solemn silence, Marco and Maria arrive home.  All Marco can think about is being forced to walk close together with Maria as the cart passed.  His heart is throbbing.

isn't this supposed to be like in italy or somewhere based off of italy in the early 1500's because i'll sure as hell tell you that some richardhead named "Maxwell Meepo"
Way to be friendly about it, starfish.

isn't this supposed to be like in italy or somewhere based off of italy in the early 1500's because i'll sure as hell tell you that some richardhead named "Maxwell Meepo" and two britsh speaking forgeters are not from italy
http://www.amazon.com/How-Read-Book-Intelligent-Touchstone/dp/0671212095


He knew about this cart.

He knows the schedule. Sometimes he missed it. Well, all of the time he did. This is his first time.

Ryaine begins to loosely follow the cart towards the gallows. "No such thing as witches, or God save me, people who are accused to be deamons in human form.

And sinners? Right, they can't pay for indulgences.

Well, of course, Heretics, but those people don't deserve it." Ryaine says in his head. Under his cloak are two smoke bombs, his own "lock breaker", and of course, his two-piece sword and two pistols.

Nothing can go wrong, can it?

Lenart glares around, growling angrily as the guards come and subdue him, pinning his arms behind himself and have the blade of pikes to his throat, baring his teeth as he watches the rest of the crew being subdued. "All I forgetin' wanted was some god-damned time t'enjoy a nice pair of ti-" he begins, before he's struck in the side of the head by the metal of steel gauntlets backed by the fist of a guard, prompting a loud 'thunk' to be heard as Lenart staggers to the side, grunting, but remaining conscious, taking the hint and quieting down.

Before long, Aedan and Lenart were hauled off by the guards, a look of disgust across Aedan's face as he was walked through the tight streets, people looking at him as though he were a despicable being, I've done nothing wrong!  They don't even know why I've been arrested!  How dare they? he thought.  Soon they were thrown into a cell, stripped of their belongings and dressed in prison rags.  "Well fock," he said to himself as he made himself comfortable in the cell in the jailhouse.  The guards and the harbormaster spoke outside the big cell in quick and fluent Italian, incomprehensible to Aedan.

Marco uses his free time to practice his swordsmanship in the courtyard.  He practices with a dummy flour sack filled with feathers and stuffing on a pole.practicing draws and jabs, lunges, overhead swings and a variety of side-slashes.  After this, he takes a stroll in the streets with his sword at his side, looking for a capitol guard.

After a short walk, he notices a guard leaning up against the wall, eating an apple.  "Now's my chance!"  Marco walks up to the man eagerly, as the man looks up from Marco's shoes, over the sword to his side and to his face.

The soldier stands up suddenly from his relaxed position and sets his right hand upon the hilt of his sword.  "You there, halt!"
Marco stops, holding his hands in front of him.  "What?  Wait, oh no this is a mistake.  I just wanted to talk with you.  Nothing more."
"What do you want?" the soldier asks, loosening up, but not entirely letting his guard down.
"Well, I am currently a clerk for the Capitol, but I am looking to join the Capitol Guard.  My uncle was a swordmaker, and a teacher."  Marco slowly moves his hands down to his belt, where he unfastens the scabbard from his belt buckle, and holding the scabbard in his right hand, hands the sword to the soldier, who takes the blade out to inspect it.  After he inspects it for a few seconds he sheaths it and hands it back to Marco.

"Your uncle was a good craftsman.  Do you need anything else?"
"Oh, yes, well I was meaning to ask what I need in order to join the Capitol Guard."
"Go to the recruitment office at Imperius Central and talk to a recruiter.  I'm just a regular, so I can't help you."
"Okay, I will.  Thank you!"
"Alright bye."  The guard resumes his relaxed position and fruity snack.

Marco begins his walk back to his house.  The sun is lowering in the sky.  "Alright.  This is your chance, Marco!  No more paperwork and that annoying little brat Benito!"