Author Topic: USSR app wip  (Read 3617 times)

Seems very boxy and bland.
« Last Edit: January 04, 2008, 01:21:33 PM by Azazel »

well yes i see all your comments and all sorry for all the post but i like replying back. om once again sorry for terrible screen shots ill get better ones as soon as update and all of you are asking what it is. it is a palace one that i am making kind of randomly im puting a bunch of different parts together from real palaces and seeing what comes out.

It's okay.  :cookie:
 
Just make it more.. scenery-ish and complex.
Since the middle could be like a courtyard, you should make evened up palm trees, a bench... like that.

Am I the only one who was intrigued by this?

It looks heavily macro'd.

How odd. I seem to like symmetry.

Also, shouldn't it look like that? The only thing you should non-macro for it terrain, really.

Im sorry everyone for posting so many times im not trying to bump topic i just dont want to use new thread. So heres some updated pics of what it looks like so far still not much done yet but people said it looked to macroed so i changed the look of the main tower and see if you like.








i like this one better. it still looks a little bit macroed but i macro all the time so cookie 4 u :cookie:


The first one reminds of Captain Crunch cereal, the one with the crunch berry things.

Detail, detail, detail my friend.

Also, Detail doesn't mean put a bunch of random stuff all over your build to make it look complicated.

I really like seeing some of your old builds, then seeing how much you have progressed during a short amount of time. You have a lot of potential, however, this build is not quite showing what you can do. You need to add a lot more. USSR apps should be BIG! This is a good size but has a lot of "emptiness" in it. Add it up, style it up, and make it less macroy and you could have a chance. However, I would say next time, finish the build completely instead of asking for advice, that is just in my own opinion, that way people don't get turned off by it being unfinished and it really shows that you did everything yourself and didn't add what other people told you to add. This is very good work though Builder. You should be very proud of yourself.

Why does this remind me of the palace of New Sheoth?

Why does this remind me of the palace of New Sheoth?
Omg I was thinking the same thing!