Author Topic: River Scenery, with old rusty bridge thing. [new stuff, pg 2] (Read 3223 times)

Xeidious* · October 06, 2015, 04:58:18 AM

I'm building something... again.
and i basically just wanted some feedback on what's currently built, rate x/10, give some tips as to how i should improve it, etc,
I'm not the best at making bridges and stuff.

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Mr.No�ody · October 06, 2015, 05:10:53 AM

A very nice use of the new modter fences and the tree pack. Would have been nice if the river bank had a bit of variation rather than being straight. Doesn't look like the outer terrain is quite done, it does need a bit more shaping as the outer walls looks particularly boxish. Maybe cut back on the grass brick usage. When used in bulk in a larger area it tends to look tacky, but again, that's mostly on the outer detail which I assume still isn't done.

Overall it's a very nice run down depressing bridge. Soft shaders really makes it go the extra mile.
And damn, somebody really needs to remake the bigger tree bricks...

Space1255 · October 06, 2015, 05:15:05 AM

7/10, I'd say use smaller lattice / wire fence bricks for more detail but we don't have those iirc.
Other than that, good job!

Xeidious* · October 06, 2015, 05:19:50 AM

Quote from: Mr.No�ody on October 06, 2015, 05:10:53 AM

A very nice use of the new modter fences and the tree pack. Would have been nice if the river bank had a bit of variation rather than being straight. Doesn't look like the outer terrain is quite done, it does need a bit more shaping as the outer walls looks particularly boxish. Maybe cut back on the grass brick usage. When used in bulk in a larger area it tends to look tacky, but again, that's mostly on the outer detail which I assume still isn't done.

Overall it's a very nice run down depressing bridge. Soft shaders really makes it go the extra mile.
And damn, somebody really needs to remake the bigger tree bricks...

Quote from: Space1255 on October 06, 2015, 05:15:05 AM

7/10, I'd say use smaller lattice / wire fence bricks for more detail but we don't have those iirc.
Other than that, good job!

Thanks for the Feedback! Ill try to take this into consideration, and yeah it's not quite finished as you can see here, i've still got a bit of a ways to go.

Space1255 · October 06, 2015, 05:43:45 AM

Holy stuff
8/10 now.

some random idiot · October 06, 2015, 08:51:15 AM

i like the rocks

i love rocks

Conan · October 06, 2015, 10:38:25 AM

not sure if you edited op to remove old images, but what you have there now is pretty impressive

are you using the modular trees pack for the rocks?

Xeidious* · October 06, 2015, 10:54:17 AM

Quote from: Conan on October 06, 2015, 10:38:25 AM

not sure if you edited op to remove old images, but what you have there now is pretty impressive

are you using the modular trees pack for the rocks?

No the rocks are it's own add-on. actually i don't even remember where i got them, and no the op is still same as it was when i first posted, just had some spelling errors at first.

Lord Furdle · October 06, 2015, 02:03:03 PM

9.9/10 too much siba bricks

seargant2 · October 06, 2015, 03:21:20 PM

These supports look really wimpy.
Otherwise, 9/10

Pixie Stix · October 06, 2015, 04:11:12 PM

Those shaders are lovey

WaterOre · October 06, 2015, 04:18:51 PM

are those rocks and bushes along the side of the river recolored tree toppers?

Arekan · October 06, 2015, 04:41:58 PM

Should release a save file.

EDIT
If you made it so that there's a road on either side that are on the same level as the bridge, like, a dirt road, it'd work quite well for zombie-l4d-esque games.

Flame · October 06, 2015, 05:27:24 PM

yesss this is amazing

9/10, supports do look a little small for such a heavy-looking bridge. i really can't wait to see what you're gonna do with this

Xeidious* · October 06, 2015, 07:31:26 PM

Quote from: WaterOre on October 06, 2015, 04:18:51 PM

are those rocks and bushes along the side of the river recolored tree toppers?

The rocks are another pack, the bushes are the tree toppers.

Quote from: Arekan on October 06, 2015, 04:41:58 PM

If you made it so that there's a road on either side that are on the same level as the bridge, like, a dirt road, it'd work quite well for zombie-l4d-esque games.

i've already started working on just that, it's not much right now but here's some pictures.

Quote from: Flame on October 06, 2015, 05:27:24 PM

yesss this is amazing

9/10, supports do look a little small for such a heavy-looking bridge. i really can't wait to see what you're gonna do with this

Thanks, ill probably work on making the supports a little more stronger looking.