I said the blockland forums not your post history
I'm going to review this post.
At first glance, this post is a sick, sickly sick loving burn. Like, damn yo. But if we take a closer look at this text, you'll realize a few things have gone awry, and are just plain bland or incorrect. The verb "said" is inapplicable here. You know why? It's because it's loving text, not speech. That's a big A- for this post. You can't hear this stuff. Another point of this post that's just plain forgety is the fact that a proper noun isn't properly punctuated.
Blockland deserves as much respect as you don't, you piece of stuff. Capitalize your words. Yet another point of this post that has gone wrong is that you missed a comma. One of the most common points of punctuation just isn't in its goddamn rightful place. Did you say, "
Blockland forums not your post history," or did you mean to differentiate between the two? That's right motherforgeter. You crossed the line. You even forgot the period at the end of the sentence. Good job. This burn isn't even a burn anymore, it's a match stricken on a wet box. forget you.
1/10
