Author Topic: Uncle Rabbot wrote a creppypoosta (Read 861 times)

Rabbot32 · June 30, 2016, 07:42:51 PM

My girlfriend wants to forget 76
Thoughts, BLF?

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Red Spy · June 30, 2016, 07:43:33 PM

From the title along it's an instant 10/10

Toxicology · June 30, 2016, 07:43:50 PM

sceaaaary

Jshotgun · June 30, 2016, 07:48:14 PM

felt too much like a poem but eh
it was ok

McZealot · June 30, 2016, 07:53:26 PM

Good imagery, but not good enough to provoke a physical reaction. Try the story "Guts" if you're curious.
Maybe tell the reader to hold their breath for that scene?

Also, nothing in it was really creepy or scary at all. Nothing that sticks with you. And the "Good gas, isn't it?" seemed really obvious. Like most people wouldn't figure it out?

Quote from: Jshotgun on June 30, 2016, 07:48:14 PM

felt too much like a poem but eh
it was ok

What?

TheABELBOTO · June 30, 2016, 07:55:27 PM

Of course this would be in SOGwiki

The ending ruins any ambiguity on what's going on and the title is potential spoiler

carolcat · June 30, 2016, 08:19:56 PM

Quote from: Rabbot32 on June 30, 2016, 07:42:51 PM

My girlfriend wants to forget 76

was disappointed that there was no 76 involved

rambo1220 · June 30, 2016, 08:30:37 PM

Quote from: McZealot on June 30, 2016, 07:53:26 PM

Try the story "Guts" if you're curious.

loving christ I can not even bring myself to read that again.

I'm not queasy or someone who vomits easily, it pretty much never happens unless I'm sick or something, but "Guts" was the most nauseating and disgusting thing I've ever read, what amplifies that story also is that it's not some spooky spookeronio hunting down the protagonist, it's something that is entirely real, has happened before, and is just so realistic and descriptive it's just. ehaugh god damn forget that stuff never reading it again.