- don't use ANY dubstep or any of that commonly used royalty free music. chances are everyone that watches has heard it before.
- stop with the spinning, the explosions, all of that weird noise.
- thats a nice font but not really fit for an intro imo
reminder that an introduction to lead to whats actually in the video. take the
game grumps intros as an example, they're quick, have a familiar jingle, has effects where they're needed, a good background to contrast with the stuff on screen, and show whos in the video. its a nice intro, at least in my opinion.
you dont need to put all that effort into making like a bajillion intros, but you way overdid it with the effects and the background isn't good either (gradient.)